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Flowers Need Time To Bloom. So Do You. 🥀

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Pink_glasses2 years ago
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Nice opening and interesting synopsis. 😊 Only few grammatical mistakes that could be easily fixed by the author. It’s hard to comment much on the story because only few chapters are out, but the author’s writing is promising. Looking forward to your updates. 😌
The Maid 'N' Princess of the Eclipse
Fantasy · Izumi_Aley
Pink_glasses2 years ago
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Little grammatical mistake. 🤭
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The Maid 'N' Princess of the Eclipse
Fantasy · Izumi_Aley
Pink_glasses2 years ago
Posted
The story is beautifully written and has a nice twist (no spoiler!) I love the male lead in this book, and the female lead is lovely. Just a few grammatical errors, but the author manages to bring out emotions and feelings for the female lead.💜 I’m looking forward to your updates, author! 💜
The Pure and The Corrupted
Fantasy · Pato93
Pink_glasses2 years ago
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Me wants too :3
She ate some hot cup noodles that Meghan prepared for her and snacked on an orange as she described the main building and the library to Meghan. The two girls decided to meet up with George tomorrow and peruse the entire library. They were all bookworms and Ana loved that.
The Pure and The Corrupted
Fantasy · Pato93
Pink_glasses2 years ago
Commented
What a nice man 🥲
He noticed that her pace had slowed down compared to earlier. 'She must be exhausted.' He thought. He hoped she had enough energy to eat some food before she fell asleep and just like that, his thoughts abruptly drifted to how she would look if she was sleeping peacefully.
The Pure and The Corrupted
Fantasy · Pato93
Pink_glasses2 years ago
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"Thank you." Anaya smiled politely at Maeve and started to walk out, in a rush to feed herself and just lie down for a while. She felt weak and she just wanted a good rest more than anything else.
The Pure and The Corrupted
Fantasy · Pato93
Pink_glasses2 years ago
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I would only nod too 🤭
Anaya nodded. Her erratic heartbeat slowing down at his words. She took a deep breath and exhaled. She saw Maeve walking over with the injection and she quickly took Khai's hand and closed her eyes tightly shut.
The Pure and The Corrupted
Fantasy · Pato93
Pink_glasses2 years ago
Commented
Anaya widened her eyes at how Maeve spoke to the young man, but she looked up at him to see that he was hardly bothered.
The Pure and The Corrupted
Fantasy · Pato93
Pink_glasses2 years ago
Commented
Anaya tried to get her hand out of his grip, but her attempt was so weak that she gave up after trying twice. His grip wasn't harsh and the feeling of his hand on hers didn't really bother her. She briefly wondered why, before the pain consumed her thoughts.
The Pure and The Corrupted
Fantasy · Pato93
Pink_glasses2 years ago
Commented
So gentle 🥹
Khai stretched to grab her keys and helped her up, careful not to hurt her while holding all her weight. She was a little more than feather light, he noticed.
The Pure and The Corrupted
Fantasy · Pato93

Mr Ceo Knows My Secret

A twenty-two-year-old Glory led a double life. By day she was just a lowly office worker outliving her nasty bosses and superiors, and by night she worked as a hostess at a club surrounded by the city's elite. A CEO of her company finds out about her secret but promises not to tell anyone if she poses as his business partner and uses her beauty and intelligence to help him close deals with companies. To help her pay the hospital bills and give her mother a longer life, she agrees to his offer and accepts the deal. During her clandestine working hours, she meets another man whom she thinks is a good person, until she finds out that he is her boss's biggest rival. How can she free herself from her double life and the love triangle, where to hide?

Pink_glasses · Urban

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6 Chs