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Lord_Kamish

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  • Lord_Kamish
    Lord_Kamish3 months ago
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    Love this, I enjoyed it even I don't have much knowledge in Monster Hunter world, the unorthodox and savage way of fighting of the monsters is a great way to make them unique to the Pokemon. Great job author, hope for more chapters.

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  • Lord_Kamish
    Lord_Kamish5 months ago
    Posted

    One of the well written fic I've ever read, the build up and the end was done splendid. The best part would be the MC's closure with the past. Recommended read.

  • Lord_Kamish
    Lord_Kamish5 months ago
    Posted

    Good story, though almost same with the other fic out there, the problem I encountered here are the names, at first I thought it was a pokemon comes to blue star type which is acceptable if that happens, but no he was reborn to the pokemon world wherein there are actual names of known characters like Iono but the translator here turned it into Luna Volt? Like she has an actual name. If the name sounded like it, acceptable, but changing the name of a known character. Nah. Anyways good story though.

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  • Lord_Kamish
    Lord_Kamish8 months ago
    Posted

    Read this before but haven't managed to continue it, can you pls fix the chapters? Maybe add some proper line breaks, and also kindly check the names, its pretty much mixed up, the name of the MC and Giovanni often got mix up, then also Pokemon names. Thanks. So far I enjoyed the story.

  • Lord_Kamish
    Lord_Kamisha year ago
    Posted

    Among all the Pokémon works I've read, this is by far one of the best, the combination of the MC being in a modern Pokémon world getting transported into the past was done splendidly. The advantage of the MC being a modern man was done perfectly, he's not overpowered, he's not weak either. The interactions, perfect, the world building and such, compliment each other perfectly. Fortunately I decided to read this one. Keep up the good work. Expecting more chapters to come.

  • Lord_Kamish
    Lord_Kamisha year ago
    Posted

    I like the idea of the story, as for the writing quality, a bit too repetitive, I've seen this writing style on so many latest works, "Something new, something alien, something something...", its fine on some chapters like building up suspense, but in almost all chapters, nah, if using AI was the cause of this, at least make the flow smooth and not repetitive. Anyways still good.

  • Lord_Kamish
    Lord_Kamisha year ago
    Posted

    The story overall was nicely done, the thing that bothers me though was the MC's growth, it's too much in terms of strength, I want the strategic mind of his and the unorthodox style of healing and fighting. But the MC's growth could be toned down a bit, though this is a TL, but this are the problems that I've notice. Anyways still good, looking forward for more TL chapters.

  • Lord_Kamish
    Lord_Kamisha year ago
    Posted

    The story captured Deadpool's essence, the unpredictable nature placed in a serious situation was hilarious, looking forward when jin woo resets the timeline.

  • Lord_Kamish
    Lord_Kamisha year ago
    Posted

    Honest review, I don't understand a thing, though the idea is good but the beginning isn't for me, it's full of question marks, as if the beginning was cut off.

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