Mohd_Faizal_Khan

Mentioned wrong location 5 times in 1 chapter...but the premise/plot and characterization is actually quite good.

*Chastity

I think mc just needs 6 copper coins...

Didn't you spell-check before you posted this chapter? I really like this novel (so far) but you're just being sloppy. Do better!

Xiao Hei is literally Little Black; most likely used as a derogatory term.

I'm confused...is the MC non-binary/trans or is the author?

maybe they were.....fat?

Usually a BIG fan of OP MCs but author has glossed over too much of the character building and inundated the novel with skill descriptions some of which were never used at all. Also the many many instances of repeated paragraphs is really annoying (padded word count).

Ah-hah!! The true source of the non-binary quandary...

was the rat covered in actual blood or was it's fur red in colour?