CGWarbs_Warburton
of reading
43
Read books
hey that is my name!! You can't use it for a cat of all animals. ... The cat deresrves better than that!
it'd been a while since a light novel has made me chuckle. Nice work.
NOPE. NOPE. NOPE ! I don't wanna. keep that thing sealed please!!
Don't be greedy?? This man just practically begged his SIMP of a goddess to cover his bills? There was nothi g honest or genuine about it haha
Nyx is that you?
Basically from what I can gather. A world tree grown from a seed and a guardian is chosen to look after it for many millenia. She was chosen as the guardian and when the tree grew to its 'Divine' state it requested a wish from her. She asked for a family and the world tree declared him self as her brother and her only family. p.s. This is my own judgement from the info provided so far.
That sounds like me and going the gym!
I'm guessing Envy has taken over the commander and the cilommander has been dead for ages already.
a legendary bloodline is worth billions. how do these retards not know this simple fact, all they had to do was learn from word of mouth if the info is secret. I agree emotions blind people but this is far fetched a little here.
mask? glasses... maybe I miss read?
Foreshadowing is a great way to leave the reader on the edge of his seat. However, you have to remember the MC's current circumstance, he's surrounded by enemies outside and he doesn't know it, but that foreshadow at this moment ruined that feeling of unease you built so far as you just confirmed he will be A OK. Good work so far though I'm enjoying the Novel.
has no one realised that the monument records the element with the name of ranking.. What happens if he takes first place as a necromancer. haha
This part is probably well written and an important part of the story buy Ive realised I'm skipping the majority of this part. I'm to use to the fall in power and becoming a slave to then break free and become stronger its a common classic that I've read to many times. But hey, I'm just one reader with an opinion.
This choice by the author interests me a lot. The amount of novels I have read that specify the women is a divine beauty that could cause the fall of kingdoms, and how every women who interacts with the MC is gorgeous one way or another. However this approach by sailing she is pretty and above average gave it a more realistic approach in my opinion, helping me feel more immersed in the story. Great job 👍
yeah but he ate a 3 star level body refining fruit didn't he I guess that's why a lot are confused when we think of the angel at the beginning. you would think the fruit would hold to much energy and would rip him to spreads or have more of a significant boost.
if we are going off good deeds bring positive karma then. so far all I can say is he shouldn't have bad karma like that? 1). saved and changed the fate of his own race spanning multiple universes. 2). dalin universe 3). always spares his opponents giving them a second chance etc etc I'm struggling to think of anything krone has done with malicious intent at all?
This is daft. He's basically handing the reins to his own power over to a new born child. surely I'm not the only one thinking this stupid on a new level?
This is a nice change, I'm use to the MC always being the target.
I may be dumb but I know the sky is blue due to the reflection from the ocean on the atmosphere so how is the ocean blue? sorry If this is a stupid question but i considered it now. is it to do with the salt?