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  • Random_Foxs
    Random_Foxs1mth
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    Are they not updating this anymore?

    Ch 791 Unlimited Immortal Dao (3)
    My Descendant Begged Me To Help Him Just After I Became A God
    Eastern · Let me laugh
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    Random_Foxs1mth
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    Can you keep the gender constant? It's confusing to suddenly see the gender change

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    I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm
    Eastern · Let me laugh
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    Random_Foxs4mth
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    Can you give the parents names and use them rather than referring to them as her father / mother

    Ch 104 Dual Cultivation Technique (Part 2)
    Former Interstellar Mercenary In Urban Cultivation World
    Fantasy · Peerless_CucumberX
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  • Random_Foxs
    Random_Foxs4mth
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    Read up to Chapter 100 so far and enjoy the story as a whole. The only issue is the amount of pronouns that are used incorrectly. This issue has become more obvious as I approached Chapter 100, and it disturbs the flow of the story. Hopefully, the author fixes this as having to correct the pronouns in my head every time Amalia is referred to as "he" or another character's gender seemingly changes, makes reading difficult. Also, if possible, it would be nice to have a constant update of Amalia's cultivation process rather than just knowing that she's become stronger. Like telling us when she's become the next level (not anything major though)

    Former Interstellar Mercenary In Urban Cultivation World
    Fantasy · Peerless_CucumberX
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  • Random_Foxs
    Random_Foxs5mth
    Commented

    I think chapter 448 Fiance and 447 Soldier were released in the wrong order

    Ch 448 Soldiers
    Astral Flower
    Sci-fi · Sorahana
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  • Random_Foxs
    Random_Foxs5mth
    Posted

    I enjoyed the story quite a lot. Would have preferred it to focus on one relationship rather than a harem, but the story was interesting, and the harem didn't overshadow the main storyline so it could be overlooked. However, the main drawbacks were the story ending too abruptly and certain characters being mentioned once and never again when they're set up to appear again.The ending is just disappointing as certain elements such as the Shao Family's ending and the FL & main ML's relationship could have been fleshed out further to make the ending more satisfying."Everything was settled.." is really a disappointing final line as there were many things that we never saw settled and the ending for the Shao Family is left ambiguous as we're only told their in "a state of turmoil for a time". The dismantling of the family is incomplete

    I Repeated The Same Day For 500 Years
    General · Cow Cow Cow
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