I hope your okay! It's been a year since you've written anything, and I'm praying your still kicking, considering the stressful years the world's been through. Covid, war, etc. Please, update I love your take on the Beastworld genre..

Been waiting a year now. You okay? I hope you didn't get sick by the pandemic. As for this story, if your still kicking, I like it, so hopefully you'll get around to adding more to it.

You got a very good start to this story, I would love to read more. This is a unique way you are presenting the Beast world genre in and of itself. And, I can say after reading many types of beast world novels, there's only one other with the concept of celestial beings in it. Please, keep up the good story, and all the best. ❤

Loving the song lyric headings. 😂 Do you like Linkin Park?

Love the book, only irksome issue I have is your use of thought it think I'm their mind at the end of your characters inner monologue. I've read your book level time's now, I think on this platform it'll be going on my fourth read through. 😅😂😂 Anyway who was the artist that drew the pic of Roman and Julie in the water? Cause that pic is so hot, you can actually feel what the characters are feeling. It's so well done. 💓💣💥

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Awe, no problem, I don't often comment on things, but your book is very enjoyable so me writing my opinion is something I hope will help help with getting people to read and support you.🙂

I like the uniqueness of the female characters who are more than just wall candy that in other stories prop up the male characters (even if from description their hotties), the abilities that both male and female can obtain are very interesting, and the dynamic of the interactions between gives great ascetic to the overall vibe. Also, the kingdoms so far have been very in depth in detail that I can imagine how they'd look from place to place.

please use proper pronouns. she may be a tomboy, but I'm assuming she's not transgender. it's very confusing to read and to get a true sense of the character

I agree, it's a very interesting take on a story like this. It's transmigration, but at the same time body possession. I liked how the transferee was able to keep her power from wherever she was from, but I think her name from her previous life would be good, and the dates of past and present

Well I wonder how she'll react to find out they knew who her mother was or suspected who her mother was, and her heritage. As for the white sabre's and the ambush, one can only assume that when the Arawn and Garrett or their people previously walked through the area they had a guide.