i give it a 5 because that's all there is to get.

I'll continue it just for you

literally an idiot

Honestly i also don't like harems but it will still depend on the story

it seems i accidentally deleted a chapter, im sorry for the inconveniences ill try to remake it tomorrow once again I'm sorry

Maybe depending on the reader's wants, if they hate it i will not add if they like it I'll add.....So what do you like?? maybe i'll add

Thanks for the support guys, some of you started giving power stones and our valid views are steadily climbing up, i hope this continues....also feel free to comment your thoughts on my writting..if i should cut down the excessive details and other stuff....once again thank you for your support 🥳

also guys review my work and send me some POWERSTONES i need for ranking boost :⁠0

It is a very good concept, i like your writing style It is simple and clean the early introduction was superb

if anyone has some questions as to why please reply at this comment

Heh. you thought

Mosquitoes don't even falter in front of a fan 💀

lol

review...Writing quality is somewhat acceptable you can feel the emotion from the dialogues but sometimes the choice of words isn't that great..Story development is fast but not too fast as the tag suggests it has a fast pace, the concept is also good but not unique...The world background no comment since it only has a few chapters....This work has potential but the author's knowledge of what words to use needs more improvement....overall good but on the average side

ok i tried my best at this part but it just doesn't go with the way i wanted anyway just proceed

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I'm sorry

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