I really like this story. Please keep writing it.

I love this so far. not much there but this has potential. Please keep updating!

Thanks for the chapter.

See, now I feel dumb haha. Literally the next line lol.

What is an apule? Did you mean "apple" here?

This story is fucking amazing. Things have a purpose, events don't get forgotten, the world has depth. More than just the H, I love this.

I honestly really like it. There are some parts near the beginning that are pretty dark, but they are well done. The grammar isn't the best, most of it is good, but some places just have silly mistakes. All in all, I would recommend it. The author is building a really cool world that I want to see more of. Author, I know your not happy with some portions, but please continue writing this. You're doing a good job.

I'm not gonna tell you to stop feeling how you feel, but remember to look at what you have. You're making something special here, don't give up just yet my dude. You're doing a good job.

The new cover looks nice. I like it.