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jonasjonasjonas

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  • jonasjonasjonas
    jonasjonasjonas11mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter, author :D

    Ch 2 The First Rule [Bonus]
    being rewritten in contest!
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  • jonasjonasjonas
    jonasjonasjonas1yr
    Replied to G0d_4174
    Ch 14 A Friend's Favor (1)
    Screw the Hero!
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  • jonasjonasjonas
    jonasjonasjonas1yr
    Commented

    This tuesday we will still have 1 or 2 more chapter(s) published, so stay tuned!

    Ch 13 Incongruent Events (2)
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  • jonasjonasjonas
    jonasjonasjonas1yr
    Commented

    Original Concept Art (Ai-made)

    AURIEL BRIAR
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  • jonasjonasjonas
    jonasjonasjonas1yr
    Replied to caroline_wn

    Hello! Yes, I'm on the webnovel server. If you need to contact me, search for AUAHSRDAHGRG#9815

    Ch 8 Welcome to Discipline!
    Screw the Hero!
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  • jonasjonasjonas
    jonasjonasjonas1yr
    Replied to Pikachu_1233

    Thanks for the comment! I'm open to constructive criticism to improve the story, feel free to let me know the error -- it will help!

    Ch 6 The Southern Hero (2)
    Screw the Hero!
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  • jonasjonasjonas
    jonasjonasjonas1yr
    Replied to G0d_4174

    Thank you :)

    Ch 6 The Southern Hero (2)
    Screw the Hero!
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  • jonasjonasjonas
    jonasjonasjonas1yr
    Commented

    If you're reading this, I'm correcting a few spelling mistakes here and there. I'll do this gradually, and I also ask readers to let me know of any errors they find -- I'll be more than happy to correct them.

    Ch 1 A Generic Start (Prologue)
    Screw the Hero!
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  • jonasjonasjonas
    jonasjonasjonas1yr
    Replied to Edward_0001

    me when lobotomy:

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    Screw the Hero!
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  • jonasjonasjonas
    jonasjonasjonas1yr
    Replied to Edward_0001

    A good question, indeed. There is a chapter later on, which will still be published, which goes a little deeper into this.

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  • jonasjonasjonas
    jonasjonasjonas1yr
    Commented

    Good start, man!

    Ch 1 Prologue. Shackled
    dasDasdasdsad
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  • jonasjonasjonas
    jonasjonasjonas1yr
    Posted

    This is an analysis by the author, based on what has been published so far. - [Total score: 4☆ stars] [Yet to be revised.] - Screw the Hero is not my first literary work, nor my last. I'm someone who already published some works on webnovel (and on other platforms) some time ago. I can say that I have some experience with maintaining writing quality, frequent updating and the like. However, while I claim all of this, I am still learning. At first, this is my frank attempt to try to improve myself as I write and read people's opinions of my work. Finally, I have to say: I'm not exactly the funniest person in the world. I'm trying to loosen up a little more to make my jokes -- I want to believe they're getting better and better, along with the story development, over the course of my serialization. Now, with that said, let's get to the topics that would interest potential readers: - What ideas do I have for the story? * I try to satirize some topics through the characters' own perspectives. Both the protagonist, Rodiel, and the other deuteragonists that appear in the story. * I have some plans to improve the progression of the chapters, and also the way I work with the characters and the ''comedy''. * I also have some other plans that involve interactions with readers. And yes, you can influence the story as a reader --- some decisions will be up to the readers, through polls that will be taken occasionally. -What are the good points? * The frequency of chapters (1~2 chapters per day --- with the exception of Tuesdays). * The quality of writing, although not something so peculiar or unique (I consider it good, but it's up to the reader). * Character design and the like. -What are the points to be improved? * Although I know some points to be improved over time, I prefer that my readers point out errors in more detail. That way I can improve. Anyway, here are some of the things I plan to tweak: * Quality and timing of jokes. * Some longer chapters (currently 1800 words average). * Quality of writing, which as much as I enjoy it, I might adapt to the perspective of my characters. In retrospect, the quality of the story isn't SPECTACULAR, but it's certainly good. At least, in my opinion, of course. I believe that, through my judgment, the story is worthy of a solid 4 stars. Feel free to share your opinion in the comments and reviews section. I'm completely open to opinions and invite you to read on, and I'll be more than happy to receive constructive criticism. Thank you for your attention. Sincerely, okaysuredude.

    Screw the Hero!
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  • jonasjonasjonas
    jonasjonasjonas1yr
    Replied to G0d_4174

    me when

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  • jonasjonasjonas
    jonasjonasjonas1yr
    Commented

    Original Concept Art (AI-made)

    RODIEL DASHNER (PIC)
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