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cmluis10mthCommentedyou could delete half of this and still get the point across.
Uncertainty and fear took hold of him, filling his heart with anguish. But in the midst of the darkness, a small spark of determination ignited within Jacob. He knew he couldn't let himself be defeated by adversity.- cmluis10mthReplied to Dragon_Rage93
I tried cutting out unnecessary dialogue tags, but will get back to this later.
"Evelyn, it is indeed true. I have come to Egypt for that very purpose—to search for individuals knowledgeable about that place, form a team, and embark on an exploration." - cmluis10mthReplied to SomniferCh 63 Chapter 63: Bonding
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please leave a correction if you find it haha.
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dark humor????!?!?!?
"A thrilling movie that combines dark humor and horror-thriller elements. The plot subtly suggests the unintentional discrimination of white people towards black people and questions the prejudice that assumes black people should be physically strong." - cmluis10mthCommented
this author was smoking zaza for sure.
"Refreshing! This is a movie that black people must watch. White people don't have to, but if black people don't, I can say that you are betraying your race. Speak up for black people, and they will fully support you. Keep it up, Director Kevin!" - cmluis10mthCommentedCh 27 Chapter 27: Filming Get Out
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Mongrel??
"What is the proper name for the offspring of a human and a god?" Mr. Brunner inquired. - cmluis10mthReplied to Adramelech
Idk, I don't think so.
"He still has 13 days to return the bolt to me," Zeus stated firmly. "Otherwise, war shall ensue." - cmluis10mthCommentedCh 1 1 Week Ago
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- cmluis10mthReplied to Westley86
they are two diff people the dialogue was just a bit stuffed.
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I'll just stick to the original source it's not that big of a deal haha.
Hearing that, Alex thought, 'So I came to Resident Evil. I didn't watch the last movie, so I don't know how the virus destroyed. I'm in the hive where everything began, and Alice is here, my favorite actor.' - cmluis10mthReplied to Kral_Meco
- cmluis10mthReplied to SorryImJustDiamond
This would be even better without the Vtuber element. Make her more interesting maybe?
"The truth is, Napoleon, I came from the future," Ciela revealed and Napoleon's eyes widened at the revelation. - cmluis10mthReplied to SorryImJustDiamond
neat.
Ciela chuckled at Napoleon's suggestion, finding his attempt at humor endearing. "Bonaparte's code, huh? Well, it does have a nice ring to it," she replied with a smile. "Well, it is your invention so you have the right to name it whatever you like. Speaking of invention, you don't have a prototype right? Since my money is your money, I will give you the funds to make a prototype. And once you have the prototype, we can demonstrate it to the French Academy of Sciences." - cmluis10mthCommentedCh 48 Insurrection and the Lady in Red
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Napoleons's Code sounds cooler.
Ciela chuckled at Napoleon's suggestion, finding his attempt at humor endearing. "Bonaparte's code, huh? Well, it does have a nice ring to it," she replied with a smile. "Well, it is your invention so you have the right to name it whatever you like. Speaking of invention, you don't have a prototype right? Since my money is your money, I will give you the funds to make a prototype. And once you have the prototype, we can demonstrate it to the French Academy of Sciences."