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Naive of you, to think Masato is actually sitting on the chair. That’s too normal for someone like Masato
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May thou be blessed…
You are blessed
Simply… Whoa I simply love how everything mixed together seamlessly and perfectly. The way the lore is describe and how deep it goes, shows a deep understanding of the Akame ga Kill universe and the way it works. Akame Ga Kill was one of the first anime’s I’ve ever watch and it mark me, so finding such a story in this app surprised me in a good way. I could only be grateful to the author for bringing such a story to life. I love it.
I've already read this story on FF so I'm just here to let you all know that this is some of the best art I've ever had the pleasure of reading. The author knows what he's doing and although it's short it's really nice, plus the chapters are long so that's that. It's not perfect and it has flaws, but I feel like y’ll should give a shot.
Sorry, but I can’t continue with this. The story was fine at first but after the redo is just meaningless to me, since I know some details of what’s to come I don’t get that feeling of anticipation to continue with the next chapter. Also, you should try to improve the interactions and reactions of your characters since they feel off and out of character.
At least he didn’t off himself this time, also some background information of the MC is missing like his opinion on life and all that. I really enjoy the first draft, but just the first 12 chapter because after that, the interactions between the characters were so wierd and kind of force other than that this story was decent I guess.
Well, it looks like MC’s rage still an issue huh? Which I found unnecessary tbh, like I thought he was working on his anger issues, but he goes from 70 to 250 real quick. Like, threatening a Lord of Order? Hello? I thought the MC had more common sense than that… Don't get me wrong, I know he could pull off such a feat and I also know he must be feeling desperate right now, but that only happened because he decided to be cocky and play with Godfrey. Also, the scale power is really weird, but the gamer abilities are always wierd and broken so I shouldn’t be so surprised by it.
I stopped reading this story around chapters 80-85 because I found the MC intolerable and annoying. I started it again since I was bored and I remembered this story with a lot of potential to shine, now I can say that I am grateful to have returned since it was worth reading, although I had to ignore some stupid phases of the MC, at the end it was all in order to give depth to the MC and build a wonderful world. I'm not much of a DC fan but this story has changed my mind and I'm grateful to the author for bringing such a story, I'm really enjoying this long and sometimes tedious journey. (translate)
My brother in Christ, imagine how many WP Ian could get by becoming the king by having Mylene. Dictatorship could be at his reach…