JussMonty
I'm a simpleton. My brain can't handle complicated shit lol. If your story is readable and fits my weird criteria that even I haven't fully figured out, I will read it. Oh, I also try to write.
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JussMontya day agoReplied to DetachedDreamerHe is older, but he was unconscious and on deaths door for most of his teenage years and well into adulthood.
- JussMonty2 days agoReplied to DarkSlayer
Good enough, they can see through the mist
- JussMonty2 days agoCommented
This is a great example of what happens when a shinobi becomes stronger than the Hokage and also why Hiruzen was smart in "brainwashing" kids with the will of fire. Sakumo, Shisui, Itachi, the Three Sannin, Naruto, Kakashi, Gai, Dai, Minato, Kushina. Half the people on that list died for the village or people who live in that village.
- JussMonty4 days agoCommented
- JussMonty5 days agoCommented
Listen, I'm not complaining. Write your story however you want. I just want to advise you against writing a chapter where only less than 2 things happen. In this chapter, Ross signed Alexander's notebook. The other stuff is just set up for the next chapter. That's one and a half things.
- JussMonty5 days agoCommented
