Silver_Musketeer

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To be honest I wanted to move to the canon faster.

yes

It's a derivative term.

Don't worry though I have already written most of what you suggested. seven feet tall, a strong steed and strong subordinates.

Ahh sorry! I have already written to the awakening part

Try to stomach through the second volume. It gets a lot better from third volume

Bloody tyrant I think

Holy moly! My brother that is a great article you have written. Yeah! I was thinking about the things he will do after going into the tomb of Ariel. Well, I frankly don't if I would ever write to that point. Let me outline the third nightmare. ***Spoiler*** He will spawn in the estuary. he would get out of the fog and find himself in a ruined temple or something. He would enter the temple even though he feels great danger and sees nothing. He is also being chased by a Great Demon. He takes refuge in the temple. The temple would be filled with black ink like substance. when the demon tries to enter the temple, iT was destroyed by ink like substance. Konrad stood in the middle of the temple and looked at the killing with shock. then Suddenly thousands of eyes opened in the flowing ink and looked directly at him with chilling malevolence. It was that moment Konrad knew he facked up. "Nether is that you?" He would hear a mocking laugh. the ink would recede and reveal a lobotomized corpse sitting on the altar. his corpse. He would psychicly violated by his corrupted version. It would almost kill him. It would let Konrad live at the last moment as Konrad made a choice. Imagine the conversation between Guilliman after his return and the Big E in the throne room. Just much much more brutal and deadly. Anyway the abyss in Konrad's soul sea is actually information or knowledge. As he kills he also collects their information. His fifth aspect ability would revolve around information manipulation. *** I don't know if I ever write to that point, but yeah I am giving out the spoiler.

Please expand on your idea. I am interested