Half the words are messed up and put together to make a made up word look it over

Well it was good but did not feel like enough was given barely know anything about any of the mc’s since it is already stopped at chap 20 and without enough story given and info no incentive is there to buy the chapters

So far really interesting and intriguing love the development of the story but the mc is kinda stupid hopefully he will get better. The grammar is good but there are some different names in different places. Still worth a read

Kruxe?

Hmm I’m confused or maybe forgot. If Levi’s AI companion is a knockoff version of the main AI but is still a partially all knowing being wouldn’t it know about Aiden’s trickery and that he took the crown? Is it still technically in the game when Levi logs off, so it should know? Or couldn’t Levi just inspect Aiden to see what he might be planning or have in his possession? Maybe I’m not far enough but…

Would’ve been nicer if he named himself Cian instead of Levi

Idk it’s annoying that this is getting reposted constantly keep it here to stay. I mean soon he’ll beat up that big guy from the other gang it’s tiring a little lazy?

Gyatt

I must be high but it’s almost like I’ve seen this twice before can’t put my finger on it though wtf is going on.

Bros like a 10 year old child

Reviewing again, still very good, everything feels perfect and what I personally want in a novel. Mc is being developed well along with the world. Want more!

Down with the man! I say we commit some sort of fight club movie scenerio!

This is awesome book read all of it immediately after the first chapter, I was hooked and now want more. No grammatical errors, no events making me question what’s happening it’s all good!

Reading up to chapter 22 all I am left with is wanting more. The quality is perfect, but the chapters feel so short ugh. The story is good at the moment the world development is slow and might progress more thoroughly as the mc discovers more but feels a little lacking. But other than that I highly recommend to read and even stay up to dat with!

Want more

Yes you’re right in the world expanding through Saki, and the info that is given is good. I’m just left with the questions of “how is this world similar previous world since the same people are there” or “how come Lyra got summoned there 8 years before Saki”. Which is good in developing the mystery of the Purple Apple. I shouldn’t have implied the whole world when saying little, the current info is great in the development of the world but when left with these questions makes the story confusing. But that might just be me. Really excited for what’s to come? (づ￣ ³￣)づ

The story is interesting up to this point. There is very little information about the world they are in, not sure if intentional or not but makes the story bland. The characters are interesting and if the story keeps updating… can lead to a very well put together novel. All in all, ok atm and am hoping for more!

Beautiful and want more the writing and the details are to the poi and don’t leave me confused and annoyed love this!

Um ik Kana is crazy but this doesn’t make sense as to why she said those words and got married? Thought this was going to be a female lead without a male lead.

It’s really not as bad is originally thought the only problem was the ending of the first novel with a very unclear ending to it, I’m thankful to the author and the explanation but would have liked to figure it out in my own. Other than that very good so far mc isn’t dumb but does get annoying with this weird must take what I want and protect it personality.