Man_Thinker

Don't worry about it. All the chapters were excellent, thank you for your hard work! I really enjoyed the fights and how smart Ayanokoji and Klein were in the plan they came up with. The concept of the company Ayanokoji created was a great touch, it turned out really well. Another strong point is how he strategically uses Beyonder items to fight above his own Sequence, bringing an excellent dynamic to the story. Overall, everything is fantastic. I'll say it again: your fanfic is one of the best LotM fics I've found on Webnovel and other sites. Congratulations, you truly deserve the praise!

What the hell is this, man? I can understand trading information for ingredients and things like that, but using Sequence 1 knowledge—which literally allows you to become a God—to pay for a Sequence 7 ingredient is completely ridiculous. It made sense at first, but as this fanfic went on, I noticed the author loves to pander to the Tarot Club by just handing out free knowledge. It’s the kind of knowledge that makes absolutely no sense for a Sequence 8 to have, no matter how smart they are. And the Tarot Club doesn't even question how he knows all this; they just accept it. It borders on the absurd. Even worse is how the author loves to show off that the MC is a know-it-all who shares incredibly valuable things practically for free. I'm not denying that the story has quality, but all of this is just ridiculous. There have to be limits to keep things coherent, and the author didn't know how to develop this aspect well. But in the end, that's just my opinion.

Nao da para entender a autora nesse ponto so ignorar msm

I don't understand, what's the reason for jumping? Is he still on the forgotten coast?

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Congratulations on the excellent work! I want to make a point of saying that your fanfic stands out immensely on Webnovel, undoubtedly being one of the best crossovers between the COTE and LotM universes. Seriously, if I had to make a ranking, your story would easily take a spot in my Top 3 Lord of the Mysteries fanfics on the entire platform. What impresses me the most about your writing is how accurately you managed to capture the true essence of both Ayanokoji and Klein. It is very common to see authors lose their way when trying to write such complex characters, but unlike many fanfics out there, you actually manage to make them feel human, believable, and incredibly deep. Another huge strength of your work is how you handle their intelligence. The schemes the characters come up with aren't easy, convenient, or simply obvious solutions for the reader; they are genuinely brilliant and very well put together. You can clearly tell that there is real planning behind every chapter. Everything seems to have a well-defined purpose in the plot, whether it's for their advancement and development, the webs of intrigue, or the political clashes. This makes the read extremely engaging and fun

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I can appreciate nonsense, but this is a tough read. The character assassination here is wild; seeing Dragon and Sabo act like Buggy’s fanboys is just cringeworthy. It’s clear the author doesn't understand the power scaling at all—giving a reincarnated Buggy Advanced Conqueror’s Haki in the first ten minutes is a massive reach. It’s a shame because the technical writing is actually good, but the story makes no sense within the One Piece world.

I honestly don't get how anyone can enjoy this. I appreciate comedy and even crack fics, but this just isn't funny. The characterization is completely distorted—it’s like they all share a single brain cell. When they aren't worshipping a character for no reason, they’re acting like some weird cheering squad. It’s honestly ridiculous, not to mention all the filler that has nothing to do with the actual story.