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  • DaoistcPOVO1
    DaoistcPOVO18 months ago
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    I really, really tried to like this, but after reading over 200 chaps, just to be sure, I frankly don't like this. The original show idea is already taken. I don't particularly mind considering what it's can be good, but this is really bad. The author doesn't give our Mc actually good character development whenever he is depressed or in a hard spot he gets help barely any time later, not to mention how horny the author is its almost like a 14 year old wrote this cause. mentioning real-life people in sexual relations with a 14 year old even characters. Also, the romance isn't much, and the same is the gacha it just takes real songs from our world and the show to help "build" The world but even then there is no structure to it I am fair to the author they write well. but it feels so forced when the main character gets zero consequences and everything he wants no one in the real world acts like this around a 14 year old also being smart isn't bad I mean there is a lot of people younger who are smarter but he is smart from the beginning for no reason so it seems like the plot is pushed so he can seem like a genius. overall, I think 3 stars is fair, but I'm not reading again. In my opinion, if the other wanted to make it so sexual and dumb they should've made him smart and 18 from the start.

  • DaoistcPOVO1
    DaoistcPOVO19 months ago
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    Story feels like a way for the OP to put out their extremist views into the world meekly veiled under the guise of a non-existent plot i mean i get it sometimes you want to vent but you aren't even trying. You don't have to believe with God or any of that but you were just ranting you didn't go into depth about the character or set the story up don't make a story online like this i don't know next time consider writing your ideals in a diary.

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  • DaoistcPOVO1
    DaoistcPOVO12 years ago
    Replied to BLACKangelmarl

    when will you update this damn book

  • DaoistcPOVO1
    DaoistcPOVO12 years ago
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    I'm rating my book in my opinion so far but I'm here to inform all of you once get my 4 chapters out and we get 100 views milestone ill double it to 8 chapters all 1000 words unless like my previous words i have to recap or explain anything i have also edited the first 2 chapters

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  • DaoistcPOVO1
    DaoistcPOVO12 years ago
    Posted

    blud why did you stop posting all together

  • DaoistcPOVO1
    DaoistcPOVO13 years ago
    Posted

    good bye I'm deleting my account and you can't stop me it's been a great time with you all.

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  • DaoistcPOVO1
    DaoistcPOVO13 years ago
    Posted

    honestly 10/10 I am happy to give power stones.

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  • DaoistcPOVO1
    DaoistcPOVO13 years ago
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    huge announcement I have connected the world of all my books up to now together and I gave stared an appearance in chapter 31 as the writer that's it.

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  • DaoistcPOVO1
    DaoistcPOVO13 years ago
    Replied to Daoist079005

    you know what my friend I abandoned this series but your comment has sparked a flame to make a come back ok.

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  • DaoistcPOVO1
    DaoistcPOVO13 years ago
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    Author here I. I'm going to get to chapter 30 today and then I. will make another book I will post on that. for a bit, so don't expect more chapters in these two days also. also expect later chapters I have school.

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