will be waiting for your return thanks for making an amazing fanfiction.

Ace should be pirate king just saying.

hope amber ship is not permanent.

tftc

You have translated this fic very well this 5 star is well deserved.

Raven will meet professor x eventually so it can still work out.

i hope iceberg part still takes place other wise whole timeline will become a mess.

thanks

cool don't know about the third eye though.

more please.

i hope he has some extra powers. suggestion- invisibility, teleportation (like Nightcrawler), venom punch like miles, venom blast (yellow kamehameha), super speed (like quicksilver), claws like spiderman 2099. well these are things I would want in case I was suddenly spiderman.

can't wait to see reactions of his parents and classmates tftc

so like superior spiderman?

please don't drop this it's really good.

harem destroys good story.

exactly 👎

tftc

No matter how much of fantasy it is still taking place in real world not anime world and I atleast have not seen a real person with two wife's at the same time who is not in jail so i hope you reconsider.

+1

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