A_Little_Monster
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I rip my bananas in half before I eat them...
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A_Little_Monster1yrCommentedCh 30 Chapter 30 Mason’s Diary- A_Little_Monster1yrCommentedCh 29 Chapter 29 Books
- A_Little_Monster1yrCommentedCh 28 Chapter 28 Resolve
- A_Little_Monster1yrCommentedCh 27 Chapter 27 A Brother’s Gift (2)
- A_Little_Monster1yrCommentedCh 26 Chapter 26 (Spoiler, Title at the Bottom)
- A_Little_Monster1yrCommentedCh 25 Chapter 25 Exploring the Ruins
- A_Little_Monster1yrCommentedCh 24 Chapter 24 The Ruins
- A_Little_Monster1yrCommentedCh 23 Chapter 23 The Harshness of the World of Beasts
- A_Little_Monster1yrCommentedCh 22 Chapter 22 Pursuers
- A_Little_Monster1yrCommentedCh 21 Chapter 21 Unfathomable
- A_Little_Monster1yrCommentedCh 20 Chapter 20 New Powers
- A_Little_Monster1yrCommentedCh 19 Chapter 19 Evelyn’s Evolution
- A_Little_Monster1yrCommented
Thank you for the chapter. However, I feel that you should put more emphasis on her being an owl by making her follow earth logic a bit more, like showing off that she's more active at night, has better eye sight in the dark, etc. other than that, I feel as though this story is nice, and it certainly is interesting.
Ch 18 Chapter 18 Aftermath - A_Little_Monster1yrCommentedCh 17 Chapter 17 Comeuppance
- A_Little_Monster1yrCommentedCh 16 Chapter 16 Days of Experimentation
- A_Little_Monster1yrCommentedCh 15 Chapter 15 New Favorite Test Subject
- A_Little_Monster1yrCommentedCh 14 Chapter 14 Rage
- A_Little_Monster1yrCommentedCh 13 Chapter 13 (Spoiler, Title at the Bottom of the Chapter)
- A_Little_Monster1yrCommentedCh 12 Chapter 12 Experiment Begins