DrakooTheRat

you dont use btw here as youre not actually talking to the reader. if you just remove that it should be good

damn bro there a google clan too?

ok

who tf is satori? was he one of the ones from the orc fight?

indifferent

thres no "?" there. also symphaty much?

Daaam alr

wasnt she 3 tailed? or am i remembering the names wrong

maybe make Sol a little less powerfull. the chieftans are supposed to treaths and yet they feel weak. Sol should have a goal of strenght to strive towards or else it all feels empty

u kinda jumbled up this sentence here.