Really love this novel. I love the two best friends’ dynamic and how they try to stick to the script…and fail the next minute and just went in guns blazing. Nathan wouldnt have needed to bash himself lololol. Well, speaking of Nathan I guess my only peeve is that he does not get enough screentime? I do find Brian charming but Nats has little spotlight. Nevertheless, when it does shine down on him he can be a cool guy. Overall, great novel with a hundred chapters and counting. Its worth your time, campers ヾ(〃^∇^)ﾉ

Oki hopping off here. There is potential, but that would only come out after a very much needed rewrite.

Wack characterization and pacing is not a great combo…

Hmmm big charcter dump here and pacing still wack (not a good match) but still intriguing.

Yea the pacing was a bit wack but Im gonna give this a chance cuz it honestly looks interesting

People of the slums looking at the scene before them: Definitely not what you want to see on a Tuesday 😬

Reality has a lot less quicksands to worry about. Theirs is not reality and Vietnam war traps are litered all around them XD.

Another author I follow is named Wicked and he writes amazing

Crusader honestly fits right in. I wouldnt be surprised if he was actually a DC character (considering the 90s uhm this couldve been a bad thing)

Im still giving power stones here lol

Wicked at it again with the compelling fanfics. I know jackshit about GoT as Ive only watched season 1 and never brought it up (I just forgor even when I enjoyed it) so I have the wiki on as I read BUT your worldbuilding is certainly topnotch to make me get lost in it. What I love most is the pacing, especially when the pyramid spins to let us see the other sides of the shape. You did it better than the Walking Dead did honestly as you showed movement without sacrificing the pacing. Lastly, spelling can be a bit cuckoo and some sentences get repeated or have an alternate version of it on the next line but I Do Not See™ as Im very much having fun. Overall, another great fic from Wicked.

I just freaking adore that Micah’s intent comes in the name of his love and respect that he became such an antithesis to Gray’s transactional and distrustful start. Also its not everyday I get to read about such a gremlin of a MC.

Morals…

Her epiphany was very CH but I love it nontheless

To be honest I love me some stories that is just Some Guy™ that somehow ascends to godhood/stardom etc. So your pacing is nothing new to me and I quite like it! It also shows how MC is just simple minded but kind throughout this. Just fingercrossed that he wont become jaded through all this. And the future arc is hella interesting. 500 years? MC got to advance technology 1000 years prior then ez

Made an account just to comment. Gotta say, I will forever miss MC because of how well-written he is. I love me my Flawed-Heroes. And by Flawed I mean they stay human, make human mistakes, while can still get back on track. Your work is really well written (I agree, I would also be mad if people compare your work to their “better reads” because what the f are they talkin about) and even if I only have the base info on DC characters (I legit only know about the Justice League and a bit of the Gotham and Teen Titans rest is null) I still enjoyed it greatly. Kudos to the Wicked! May you have no rest on the merry days to come!

Pfft was just about to comment this 😂🤣