Nitsuga_Ni

Really love this novel. I love the two best friends’ dynamic and how they try to stick to the script…and fail the next minute and just went in guns blazing. Nathan wouldnt have needed to bash himself lololol. Well, speaking of Nathan I guess my only peeve is that he does not get enough screentime? I do find Brian charming but Nats has little spotlight. Nevertheless, when it does shine down on him he can be a cool guy. Overall, great novel with a hundred chapters and counting. Its worth your time, campers ヾ(〃^∇^)ﾉ

Oki hopping off here. There is potential, but that would only come out after a very much needed rewrite.

Wack characterization and pacing is not a great combo…

Hmmm big charcter dump here and pacing still wack (not a good match) but still intriguing.

Yea the pacing was a bit wack but Im gonna give this a chance cuz it honestly looks interesting

People of the slums looking at the scene before them: Definitely not what you want to see on a Tuesday 😬

Reality has a lot less quicksands to worry about. Theirs is not reality and Vietnam war traps are litered all around them XD.

Another author I follow is named Wicked and he writes amazing

Crusader honestly fits right in. I wouldnt be surprised if he was actually a DC character (considering the 90s uhm this couldve been a bad thing)

Im still giving power stones here lol