Please don’ be discouraged with these negative people. There’s a cool youtube video called Hater Psychology that explains why some people feel the need to criticize and bring others down. And it has nothing to do with you but their own insecurities. You can only do what you can do and grow as an author. And you’re doing a good job! I enjoy your stories and if I didn’t, I would offer some constructive and kind suggestions, not just complain with the purpose of hurting you. Hang in there!

A nice and slow story. Not overly dramatic.