Luxuria_5984

You have not refined after getting this from the AI , You ( Author) should remove the you from the Mc as this second person perspective feels weird that would be most important thing, now you are using AI so after AI writes it you should read that and tray to integrate as much as human writing feel possible, all this " your presence" , " you are architect" these phrase sound so much AI that many can spot on to that.

Maharaga

I have completed my promise for 5 stones , i amy even gave you 6 stones , next time I would give after updates

Mass release

Is it translation of chinese novel ? because I am seeing so much aversion to play for japan in our Main character .

Both

Suspense

Damn , this is making me emotional, who writes so much emotional scene between human and cultivation techniques . This is peak

Keep track of his adventure in his world , so that it would be easy for you.

Maharaga