Buco7854

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

To be honest im getting a bit tired of those 'inner thought' of the MC.I dont want to sound rude or anything but ye, its honestly annoying, I dont need those philosophical thought.I thought it would be nice to say cause its honestly killing the book imo. Also the word is growing more and more into a huge mess (people on mars and venus, already an apocalypse etc..)thats my humble opinion at least but I dont think im the only one. I didnt wanna make this comment since its probably not so nice to receive one like this but I was growing tired and tired of it and I think i maybe woudl have stopped if it wasnt for Shuri😅, so just letting you know, maybe some people feel the same and dont voice it or maybe im the only one if its the case ig good for you but otherwise I hope it is helping, kind of sad, really loved it at the beginning (not like its a lost cause currently).

oof rip 7, 8 and 9

You're scaring me did I just got alzheimer wth i dont remember that at all. Thanks anyway

Ah ye , didn't think of that.😅

I meant the ex boyfriend of her sister part

Well its not gonna be the most detailed explanation but ye the arc is cool, Action stuff is good but I like this aspect of the book even more. I like those type of story line.

did I miss something ? Can someone explain?

The Magician sounded better 😭