can't wait for the next chapter of thier lives!!!thanks for the update

Thanks for the chapter and can't wait for the next chapter.....oh maybe you can have then interacting with british upperclass and change a few stuff not massive changes but some and America!!!!!!thanks for the story still one of my favorite😍😍😍😘😍😍😍😘😘

I'm so excited.....thanks for the update!!!😍😍😍😍😍

cause it seems that they are almost the same age soo they probably can relate to each other

Loving this😍😘😍😘😍😘😍...the new chapter is soo good.....thanks for the updates and I love his budding relationship with Amun maybe they can be friends!!!!!!!!

loving this...please add more depth to amun....in the books he was quite removed from most of the plot but I always found him to be a very interesting character..I mean he is an ancient vampire so I imagine there is more to him than meets the eye...Thanks for the update😍😘😍😘😍😘

absolutely loving these frequent updates😘😍😘😘😘😍😍THANKS

Love that tie back to amunThanx for the chapter😍😘😍😘😍😘😍

Give him a mate soon....previous post said make it a wolf but I don't agree just mske it a vampire!!!!

Thanks for chapter!!!!

edit anti-vampire

loving it!!!thanks for the chapter😍😘😘😘😘

LOVING THIS 😍😍😍there is a previous comment about taking the volturis place but I feel that that is too much change it will make the story unrecognizable although I wanna see his reaction to Edward😂😂....if anything he can make small changes like improved hygiene in medieval London,change colonial methods and please make him meet Vikings or make a secret society that guides humanity but don't make him ati-vampire... please🙄🙄 thats a used up trope!!! or you can disregard everything I just said because you're doing awesome job😍😍THANKS for the chapter and keep updateing please😍😘😍😘

edit...it "does not have to restrain"

I agree about magic but he does bot have restrain himself about changes I mean he already started a bank sooo....other that that I love this book😘😘😘please keep the updates coming and...HELLO from fiji🇫🇯🇫🇯🇫🇯

love this book 😘😘😘😘😘

This is really great and thanks for tge update

Thank you for the update...I downloaded this app just to read this...so...thanks!!!![img=recommend][img=recommend]