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i am looking for potential wn's, interested in suggesting me a few of them?

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  • Shibo_simp
    Shibo_simp1yr
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    The author is doing just great. I am a fan of this masterpiece here, I would highly recommend to read this one. It has potential, The author gotta keep up with the story devlopement tho. The starting chapters are minda weird as well, the sentences are strange and weird to read. otherwise the story is great, keep it up author san.

    Primordial Chaos: Evolution Beyond Mortality
    Fantasy · That_Cultivator
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  • Shibo_simp
    Shibo_simp1yr
    Commented

    ah , the chapters end , guess I will have to wait for updates

    Ch 6 Quest completed
    RISE IN THE VR WORLD
    Games · DaoistMK5HEc
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  • Shibo_simp
    Shibo_simp1yr
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    I like that the author atleast understands where he is lacking , this story has some potential but lacking in grammar . Hope that the author fix these chapters soon

    Ch 5 The First pillar of death
    RISE IN THE VR WORLD
    Games · DaoistMK5HEc
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  • Shibo_simp
    Shibo_simp1yr
    Commented

    don't worry sir , take your time

    (Note - the story may be unbalanced and there might be too much mistakes but please give me some time to edit these chapters)
    RISE IN THE VR WORLD
    Games · DaoistMK5HEc
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  • Shibo_simp
    Shibo_simp1yr
    Commented

    This new friend is a little good ig.

    Ch 4 WORLD ANNOUNCEMENT
    RISE IN THE VR WORLD
    Games · DaoistMK5HEc
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  • Shibo_simp
    Shibo_simp1yr
    Commented

    I hope he hunts a kawaii dragon

    Ch 3 ONLINE FOR THE FIRST TIME
    RISE IN THE VR WORLD
    Games · DaoistMK5HEc
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  • Shibo_simp
    Shibo_simp1yr
    Commented

    this is my first novel and its not so famous ,I won't expect much but atleast a mc with some sense and no cringe girls pls

    Ch 2 Creating a character.
    RISE IN THE VR WORLD
    Games · DaoistMK5HEc
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  • Shibo_simp
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    RISE IN THE VR WORLD
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    RISE IN THE VR WORLD
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  • Shibo_simp
    Shibo_simp1yr
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    this book is OK-OK, not too good and not too bad either , author , you should use a grammarly for your chapters to have less grammatical mistakes.

    Ch 1 Zforce online
    RISE IN THE VR WORLD
    Games · DaoistMK5HEc
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    RISE IN THE VR WORLD
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  • Shibo_simp
    Shibo_simp1yr
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    It's a habit now

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    RISE IN THE VR WORLD
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  • Shibo_simp
    Shibo_simp1yr
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    dude , just eat some food or you will not be able to work all day

    He was in a great rush right now, he ate nothing and just picked up his bag, locked the main door of the house and left.
    RISE IN THE VR WORLD
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  • Shibo_simp
    Shibo_simp1yr
    Commented

    relatable *_*

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    RISE IN THE VR WORLD
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