Bosaliong
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Thanks for the input! I will consider doing a poll in the future if I'm uncertain about something, but for now your words have made me quite confident with the current pacing. I guess it's a bit difficult to judge the pacing and perhaps other elements of the story from the author's perspective. Anyway, thank you for your constant support and have a nice day :)
I've thought about calories before (Drai ate a lot of meat back at home) but haven't considered it for further down the story. Thanks for the reminder! Although I don't think it will be noteworthy enough as a plot point, I might include it in passing or in the details. I'm a bit concerned about the pacing of the plot (I'm afraid it's too slow for some readers), so I might glance at the details regarding locations or even during conversations (I'll still try to make them sound rather realistic). What do you think? Is the pacing too slow for you?
That was the intention. Thankfully it did slap
Don't worry, he'll lose his naivety as he experience the world more. But I don't know if he can be as smart as Christo. His genes are lacking :P
Okay then, I'll find a way to use "Halo" as a character name. It will probably be a side character, as I have already established the main cast. Do you have any suggestions or wishes for the character? If not, I'll just try to not make him an antagonist :P
"So I say thank you for the music, the songs I'm singing Thanks for all the joy they're bringing Who can live without it? I ask in all honesty What would life be?" ABBA - Thank You for the Music
You're very welcome! Thank you for your kind words, as they have given me extra motivation. I sometimes doubt certain aspects of my writing; so, knowing that some people do enjoy the novel helps easing me of my worries. I hope I can live up to your support and expectations. Cheers! :)