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Tanelornian1yrPostedI very much like that this starts with Eight already in deep trouble. And some of his responses to his situation are really strong, like: "...he knew he wouldn’t last many more weeks of this menial work. He needed to escape, but he could only wait for the right opportunity. There was a difference between escape and freedom." (I love that last line.) I'm not sure 'brick' is the right word. To me a brick is small. Maybe 'slab?' Stone slab? I know this is a villain's story, but I stil wonder if a few moments of softness wouldn't actually make it more effective--including more effectively villainous. I like the tension between the use of 'planet,' which implies sf and 'mana-core,' which implies fantasy. Makes me want to keep reading to find out where exactly we are! Oh, and 'trading injury for injury' is a grippy concept. I don't know if you develop it but it definitely sparks my curiosity!
- Tanelornian1yrCommentedCh 4 In Pursuit of Freedom
- Tanelornian1yrCommentedCh 24 Build A Wall
- Tanelornian1yrCommented
Lol soulmates
He pulled out a bottle of superglue, and poured some of it into my vagina. Ugh, this feels so wrong... Oh God, and now he's going to thrust his penis in. What the heck did I do to deserve this? He won't do it, right? He won't... - Tanelornian1yrCommentedCh 23 Mother of Exiles
- Tanelornian1yrCommentedCh 14 Realization
- Tanelornian1yrCommentedThey aren't a beacon of trustworthiness and honour, like me.
- Tanelornian1yrCommentedLooking back before fully exiting the throne room, I see Reginald's sword hanging from his waist. That sword is one-of-a-kind. There's not a single one like it in the world, and Reginald wouldn't let his prized creation be pried from anything less than his cold, dead body.