Don't touch tity's hand diver lol. The story is going down an exciting path. From what I've seen so far, divers are as worse as ghouls but the only thing separating them is their humanity.

I noticed that you included the sypnosis in this chapter. I don't know if it's a mistake or intentional but I felt like i hade to mention it. I like the character development and they way you took your time to describe the environment that the MC and Dior was in and to be honest, the power reveal caught me off guard.

If you are going to mention that everyone despise him then the teacher should'nt be an exception unless, the teacher has a different view of him. this is going to be my last in line critic. for example : In the midst of the moment, a boy taunted, "Looks like you need a towel," his scornful laugh resonating through the air. The ripple effect was evident as laughter erupted among the other students, and even the teacher couldn't hide a slight smirk. Another student chimed in, "Or a cup to drain all the sweat," adding insult to injury.

Hey, it's kenny here.. not saying you should adapt my writing style but try to get more familiar with with descriptive scenes. for example "Leo burst into the classroom, met with an unkind remark, "Oh look, it's Fatty Leo." His breaths, heavy and rapid, painted the air with a sense of urgency. Beads of sweat adorned his skin, evidence of a determined sprint through the hallways to outpace the final bell. The room seemed to absorb the tension, as classmates turned their attention to the unexpected entrance." Otherwise, good start.