redz_redeemed
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you're right, you're right. GYAT DAYUM!
a lot of commanders weren't, because if you're going to siege on a city, you're probably planning on conquering it, and you'll need men to maintain city business while you're taking it under your control, so you need 1) people fighting for control, 2) people to man city stations that citizens won't because they don't like their invaders, and 3) prevent it from being captured by a third-party or worse, the angry people you just sieged against for a year.Point is, you're gonna need a *lot* of people; or some greatly-needed plot armor. 2/2
I mean no offense in this at all, but knowing next to nothing of another country, especially in this day and age, is just willful ignorance. Just about everyone in any first-world country, assuming they've received any kind of education, would know that Venice is a city that has canals and like you said is sinking, regardless of whether or not they've been there. It's like knowing about the riots in France, or the Russo-Ukrainian war. Relatively common knowledge. Anyone with the ability to read this would know about Venice, and even if they didn't, they'd have the ability to look it up to find out more.
it's better to use the phrase "all the while" when you're doing something that can actually be done while doing other things, like humming, singing, smirking with malicious intent, drumming your fingers on each other, etc.you should have used the phrase, "before", as flicking switches, or activating magic, or something similar only takes a swift movement, a small amount of concentration, and happen in the span of a second.
He could force her to do whatever he wants, at this point.
What conditioning is really needed? She's already |Enslaved|, isn't she?
*rapidly
That's not exactly what a dhampir is. A dhampir is just a half-blooded vampire, regardless of whether you're in a dungeon or not.
I did a rough estimate, not the actual math, but I guess I was wrong.
granted, inflammable hasn't been that commonly used since the early 1920's due to it's mistakability
Strike that. I'm wrong. I apologize for false information. I'm too used to the prefix in- being used for things that *aren't* other things.
No, it does not. Enflamed, the word you're probably thinking of, means to be currently on fire. Inflammable, meaning not able to be burned, is used for things such as metal, most industrial-grade heavy plastics, and cement. Things unable to be burned.
it's not. it's in Chinese yuan. divide however much he's getting/making by 7. $1 American today is roughly 7.66 yuan.
no one noticed, but there's an extra space at the start of this^ paragraph
exchange rate dropped to 1:7, dollar to yuan
his bonus of 1000 Chinese yuan equates to roughly $138.48 American, which would be a small bonus, but he stated earlier that he wasn't paid a whole lot.
I don't think they're using american dollars in this, but Chinese yuan. 1 American dollar is about 7.6 Chinese yuan, so it's not 200 American dollars, but 200 Chinese yuan, about $27 American, which is a reasonable amount for a good meal.
sounds like a quote, almost
*large sum of coin
*their