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The pacing is good, I just think it lacks challenges worthy of the protagonist; if it continues like this for much longer, he'll get rusty, haha.

Okay, the work is finished, and what a rushed ending! Practically everything pointed to a decent ending, but this is what we got: a summary of what would have been 50 chapters or more in less than 6. I don't know if the author was too lazy to write or tired of the story, but either way, this was the rushed ending we got. If he had at least completed the 400 chapters, the ending would have been at least 40% better (sighs). Well, what can you do? It's over, so complaining about something that's already finished won't improve the ending.

Certainly, but as long as he travels the continent for a while, he'll eventually find someone who deserves his teachings.

Man, something that would be interesting for the future would be for Yoriichi to have a disciple, not only to pass on his skills, but also his philosophy, since it's quite rare to find a personality as connected to the Dao as he is. Passing that on would be really cool.

Author, I know this has nothing to do with the chapter, but I wanted to ask. In the glossary you recently posted, it says that Yoriichi and Yunyun will have a political marriage. And that's where my doubt lies: will there be romantic development between them, or will they just tolerate each other because of their families, without truly falling in love?

I'm sorry, I misinterpreted chapter 119; he was indeed carrying a backpack. I apologize for the embarrassment.

Wait, didn't he have a space storage ring? Why is he using a pouch now? When he left the Xiao clan, he only had the ring on his finger and the sword at his waist. Where did this travel pouch come from?

Will Dale train Subaru? That would be good, maybe then he would become more useful than in the original anime.

My friend, I say this because I like your fanfic, but don't publish chapters from different works in one; that will drive readers away instead of attracting them to your work. If you're going to announce a new project, do it only with a warning. Those who like your writing and the universe in which the story will take place will visit your profile to read it.

I was hoping more chapters would be released so I could read them all at once, and it really wasn't a bad choice. With that in mind, I'll comment on the last 5 chapters here, especially the approach to music. It was simply amazing and unexpected. In cultivation novels, music and its calming power are usually used to soothe the protagonist when he's overwhelmed by murderous intentions or something similar, besides the fact that this device is only used to introduce a female character or the protagonist's partner—in none (at least in the ones I've read) does the protagonist himself play an instrument—and Yoriichi's connection to nature only reinforces this. It was very interesting to read. Now that he's going to the academy, we'll finally have action and combat with the sword he forged, as well as the Sun Breathing technique, which he practically hasn't used yet. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.