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2023-01-02 JoinedSouth Africa
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  • AIRA_
    AIRA_3mth
    Replied to Lord_of_Endless

    It'll be explained in later chapters. But All I can say for now is he hates all the other Deities. :)

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  • AIRA_
    AIRA_3mth
    Posted

    I really like the premise, ninjas are rarely the focus of webnovels and i love the system, its done well and doesnt feel too bland.

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  • AIRA_
    AIRA_4mth
    Posted

    The standout feature of this novel is undoubtedly its writing style. The author has a talent for crafting intricate sentences that captivate the reader. While the initial pacing may be a bit slow, the story gradually evolves into an engaging and enjoyable read. Another highlight of the novel is the protagonist, who sets himself apart from the typical fantasy main characters by displaying a rare sense of self-awareness often absent in other novels of the genre.

    Sinner of the Spades
    Fantasy · GoneSoSoon
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  • AIRA_
    AIRA_7mth
    Replied to OakFlame

    Thank you for the feedback, much appreciated :)

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  • AIRA_
    AIRA_7mth
    Replied to OakFlame

    got it, I've dropped this complex style of writing around chapter 10

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  • AIRA_
    AIRA_7mth
    Replied to Deeen

    It must be because the text is in itallics, in this case it says BAM. If you're on mobile you should try updating your app. I hope that helps. Thank you for reading ;)

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  • AIRA_
    AIRA_7mth
    Replied to Deeen

    what is this nully?

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  • AIRA_
    AIRA_7mth
    Replied to Romance_guy

    Stick around and find out ;)

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  • AIRA_
    AIRA_8mth
    Posted

    I really enjoyed the writing style and character interactions; the first novel with a first person POV that I actually enjoyed and managed to stay consistent.

    MY SURVIVAL SYSTEM
    Fantasy · K1ngRox1E
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  • AIRA_
    AIRA_8mth
    Posted

    story is well paced and engaging, writing quality could use some work but it doesn't limit the immersion at all. I really like the mc's name, its unique and fun. would reccomend

    Nightmare Comics Survival
    Sci-fi · Missing_Grass
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  • AIRA_
    AIRA_9mth
    Posted

    The premise is intriguing and the story is engaging, but there are a few things holding it back, the chapters are a bit short, the main character's powers aren't really explained but rather vague terms are used to describe it; but these factors in no way hinder the novel, it's still a really good novel that I think deserves more attention.

    ChronoGen
    Sci-fi · Marconegrao7
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  • AIRA_
    AIRA_9mth
    Posted

    Although I'm not a fan of the genre, I found the writing style and power system to be pretty interesting. would recommend to interested in the harem genre.

    Erotic Adventures in the Omniverse: Vampire Lord got too many wives
    Fantasy · Jin_moon
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  • AIRA_
    AIRA_9mth
    Posted

    I love the descriptions and the story is intriguing, I'd just say be careful not to overload the reader with too much info too early; other than that I enjoyed reading.

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  • AIRA_
    AIRA_9mth
    Posted

    I really like the psychological aspect behind it, after every chapter I'm left with something to contemplate or think about, especially chapter one. This is really good.

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  • AIRA_
    AIRA_9mth
    Posted

    Usually sci-fi has never rally interested me, but this novel has seriously changed my mind. The concepts of the story are so unique and the writing style is fun and easy to follow. I'd recommend to anyone interested in sci fi and anyone looking for something fresh.

    Divergent check new
    Fantasy · DreamScribbler
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  • AIRA_
    AIRA_9mth
    Posted

    Amazing novel, I really like the story and whole premise. Perfect for anyone looking for a good fantasy novel, only complaint i have is the length.

    LUCID: Dream Light Fantasy
    Fantasy · Bestivota123
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  • AIRA_
    AIRA_9mth
    Posted

    The plot is an engaging mix of adventure and nostalgia, incorporating in-game elements effectively. The novel successfully evokes the joy of playing Minecraft, although pacing can be uneven.

    Reborn As A Survivor... In Minecraft!?!?!?
    Games · Spider_Thief
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  • AIRA_
    AIRA_9mth
    Posted

    The plot and story are good, but I'd suggest working on the vocabulary usage and the manner of explaining certain situations; other than that it's great!

    Ethereal Sovereign: Survival of All Races
    Fantasy · NecroLord_99
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  • AIRA_
    AIRA_9mth
    Posted

    I enjoyed reading this, I always found myself asking "What's going to happen next?". I enjoy reading about the wholesome relationship between Lily and Alex. My only criticism would be there are not enough chapters!

    Memories Beyond Mortality
    Fantasy · Adrian_Jeremy
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  • AIRA_
    AIRA_9mth
    Commented

    This sounds terrifying.

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    Memories Beyond Mortality
    Fantasy · Adrian_Jeremy
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