Cursed_Author

author this could just be my personal preference but i've noticed that you tend to stretch out your descriptions quite a bit? like at first it was cool but then it kind of just got tiring, so i was wondering if u perhaps cut a down a little on the descriptions.

my boy sunless aint cliche

thats what u refer to as the mc effect

Heres my guess hes gonna somehow make a deal with a really op devil and offer favians soul in exchange for increasing his mana pool and other powers and what not

my my what a wonderful starting point (This might be the first or second time ive seen a mc spawn in already being hunted down by the main protagonist

naw fr put some respect on his name

brooooo how did he pull that many arrows and lets imagine that time wasnt slowed down but completely stopped even then its impossible as its not like his speed increased when time stopped no it stayed the same and everyone else stopped (Thats taking into consideration that the ability didnt slow his perception of time but slowed time itself which is still nto confirmed) aghh sorry for ranting its just been bothering me for a while

ummm the ability said his perception of time meaning he only saw time slower and not time itself slowed down or was there a typo describing the skill and it actually slowed time down?

i have a question is the FL official or are there still just a bunch of girls around him that like him and no official love interest (ive kinda just been stacking chapters until a offical fl cause i feel uncomfortable not knowing who fl is and a bunch of random girls just surroudning mc, sorry for ranting..)

Malik Alshayatin (if you know, you know)