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Unchosen

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“The purpose of a storyteller is not to tell you how to think, but to give you questions to think upon." - Brandon Sanderson

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  • Unchosen
    Unchosen8mth
    Replied to dynisor

    'Sidesteps' is still correct as sunny is describing himself currently performing the action.

    He sidesteps, raising his shadow tachi to intercept the training sword. The two blades met and bit into each other, connected in a bind. He felt the shock of the impact travel through his bones and pushed the sword away — at the same moment as Morgan raised her hands, changing the angle of her weapon and pushing it forward over the tachi.
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy ¡ Guiltythree
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  • Unchosen
    Unchosen8mth
    Commented

    Nice one pointing it out

    She looked like a starving glutton who suddenly found himself choosing between three exquisite dishes.
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy ¡ Guiltythree
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  • Unchosen
    Unchosen8mth
    Replied to Inha_Cho

    [img=strong]

    Ch 1132 Ambush
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy ¡ Guiltythree
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  • Unchosen
    Unchosen10mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 1 Nightmare Begins
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy ¡ Guiltythree
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  • Unchosen
    Unchosen10mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 1 Nightmare Begins
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy ¡ Guiltythree
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  • Unchosen
    Unchosen1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 4 New Start
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    Restart:Untalented Man
    Fantasy ¡ Spartzan
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  • Unchosen
    Unchosen1yr
    Replied to Romance_guy

    The troops can conquer and get you civilians. see [img=strong]

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    Deus: We are all Lords
    Fantasy ¡ king_frosh
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  • Unchosen
    Unchosen1yr
    Replied to Dogfonos

    Harem is not Haram. Harem is not Haram. lol [img=recommend]

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    Deus: We are all Lords
    Fantasy ¡ king_frosh
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  • Unchosen
    Unchosen1yr
    Replied to KING_Emiliano

    Bro why you ranting. No one can beat the Chinese [img=strong]

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    Deus: We are all Lords
    Fantasy ¡ king_frosh
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  • Unchosen
    Unchosen1yr
    Replied to Princemark_Okibe

    Thanks a lot. I was using it to practice to my writing. Let's see about the updates though

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  • Unchosen
    Unchosen1yr
    Replied to Princemark_Okibe

    It can operate online but it has its memory in a special server somewhere

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  • Unchosen
    Unchosen1yr
    Replied to Demons_and_I

    Yes it does. They use it as a nickname for androids. Hope it wasn't confusing?

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  • Unchosen
    Unchosen1yr
    Replied to Demons_and_I

    Thanks 😊

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  • Unchosen
    Unchosen1yr
    Replied to Unchosen

    I have gotten the right link. Try this out. https://m.webnovel.com/book/nnaji's-law_25842469706351605

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    God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.
    Action ¡ Demons_and_I
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  • Unchosen
    Unchosen1yr
    Posted

    Engaging and flowing story, well-thought out world building and natural character development. You can literally feel the author's passion in this work and it is palpable. I hope the author continues to deliver at this level.

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    God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.
    Action ¡ Demons_and_I
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  • Unchosen
    Unchosen1yr
    Replied to Demons_and_I

    I just confirmed now. It is a correct variant of Gallivanting, though it is not commonly used like the normal 'Gallivanting.'

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    God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.
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  • Unchosen
    Unchosen1yr
    Commented

    This prologue is a nice and powerful intro to your story. It shows the scale of the universe you created before going ro focus on a single world. Anyway, I am using this paragraph comment to draw your attention to how you spelt gallivanting. A minor error I know, but I thought I should point it out [img=recommend]

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    God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.
    Action ¡ Demons_and_I
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  • Unchosen
    Unchosen1yr
    Posted

    With nice pacing, solid world building and good character development, the author has shown us he can craft a world that will grip our attention while keeping us always anticipating. For debut novel this is just brilliant. I hope the author continues to wow us.

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    A Warlock's Ascent
    Fantasy ¡ Indian_Sage1
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  • Unchosen
    Unchosen1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 1 Kidnapped-1
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    A Warlock's Ascent
    Fantasy ¡ Indian_Sage1
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  • Unchosen
    Unchosen1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 1 Prolouge
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    Supreme Ruler: Reincarnated as the Emperor's Bastard Son
    Fantasy ¡ Bored_Author
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