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âThe purpose of a storyteller is not to tell you how to think, but to give you questions to think upon." - Brandon Sanderson
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'Sidesteps' is still correct as sunny is describing himself currently performing the action.
Nice one pointing it out
Thanks a lot. I was using it to practice to my writing. Let's see about the updates though
It can operate online but it has its memory in a special server somewhere
Yes it does. They use it as a nickname for androids. Hope it wasn't confusing?
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I just confirmed now. It is a correct variant of Gallivanting, though it is not commonly used like the normal 'Gallivanting.'
This prologue is a nice and powerful intro to your story. It shows the scale of the universe you created before going ro focus on a single world. Anyway, I am using this paragraph comment to draw your attention to how you spelt gallivanting. A minor error I know, but I thought I should point it out [img=recommend]