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An interesting plot with a somewhat unique premise that's been handled well so far. Keep up the good work! Will look forward to reading more chapters.

him instead of her, i think?

I like how the world building was done, which described enough for me to imagine but not too much for me to be overwhelmed. The story itself isn't usually the kind I would enjoy or read normally but I had fun reading nevertheless. I feel that the plot moves smoothly from one point to another (there are times where I feel that it is erratic although I'm enjoying reading too much for those it to be a big issue.) I especially the enjoy the characterization of the MC and the other characters in the story (even minor ones). The way they converse sound natural for how I imagine they would speak in their world. The systems and concepts unique to the world of the story are explained well enough for a no-brain like me to follow along. All in all, I am looking forward to the next update of this novel.