Well author the Novel is nice i like your unique and steady pace of writing. And about Ray than for him to work his ass out to save Esme i prefare he should be as strong as the Dragon emperor and the Elf oracle than to be a chess piece he should grow strong enough to not be a chess piece. THIS IS MY THOUGHTS ON THE WAY THE STORY IS GOING 🙂

Author this Is a good story but when are you going to update more chapter or have u dropped the boom

author check this pic out

Author check it out

Author here is a picture of Sunny in his Saint form i made

Guiltythree i love your book the the cool powers of the characters one of the best books I've read so far thank u. And also I've made a picture of sunny in his tracendant form check it out.

Guiltythree i made a picture of Sunny in his Saint form it's on Facebook i would love u to check it out 🙏 it's cool though

what do u think about the chapter

Author here the novel is coming to the end of the first arc, the second one is where u will see Becky so follow me untill then.

🤣🤣🤣😅 yeat man

every time u say yeat

Nick will show them who is boss

I change my mind it going great

thanks will do

Well this is the first novel am writing pls support thank u

i don't like we're the story is going

Good please could upload more on African history