Lons

This story is such a thrilling experience, love the relationships, love the story telling maybe the only downside is how little we go into Goku and how he is a combo of a random person (SI), Luffy and obviously Goku tho there are only 13 chapters at the time of this review hopefully in the future we'll go more in depth about the topic. great job author keep the chapters flowing🤗

thanks for the chapter, and thank you for making them longer before they were way too Short you couldn't enjoy them properly but now it's getting somewhere. keep it up!!

best of luck wish u a healthy sleep cycle

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Keep it up my MAN. i love how well you made the characters in this and i have to know is that eri girl inspired by that other eri girl in my hero academia? cus shes so cute i wanna drown her in blankets and watch cars 1 all the way through 3[img=recommend]

man I don't know about anybody else but me but this hole q and a thing made you feel like a funny and wholesome guy or girl I don't know if you ever specified that... but anyway keep going imma re read this story cus i love the start of this. big kiss 😘 from uncle Lons

Big respect for not having harem

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pla don't it ruins a story and if not executed perfectly it feels majorly unrealistic and wrong