Yes! Aether works like Mana but there will be more to it soon. :) Thank you for this review, it makes me want to write more drafts!

Hi, Author! I would like to make some corrections regarding the grammar of the story, though I am not a grammarian but I hope this review helps you. Upon reading the first chapter, the things that I want to point out are; The sentences should end with a period rather than a comma. There were a few spelling mistakes that I had noticed. I commented on one of them. The grammar needs improvement, especially the capitalization of the first letter at the start of the sentence. That's all! Despite the minuses, there are plus factors that I noticed such as the world background. Goodluck on your writing journey!

Hi, Author! I think you might have put the wrong spelling of the word "revealing" as reveling.

It's disappointing to see such promising romance novel on hiatus! I really love the story telling of this novel; the imagery and how you are pulled to the world itself, definitely a must-read. Continue the good work Author!

Fixed some parts!

I'll specify it, thank you for the comment! :)

The way you worded this is amazing! I love how it is paced, though, I'll need an update about what will happen next on the story. It is still at the beginning so I'll update my review once it gets far.

The g.o.a.t. of all the novels I have read so far. I actually got into the manhwa in 2020 and 2021 for the novel and it is really phenomenal. To the translator, you did such a good job for this novel. 🙌

A message & review; Shameless Author here! This story circulates the main character's journey aiming to build his own kingdom to rival the Royal Kingdom. However, this will not be a simple path; in his adventure, he will experience lots of hardships. I advise you to not drop it, the story will be vast and exciting! I will be publishing one or two chapters a day, maybe three at some time if I'm not occupied! This is an entry for Fantasy Carnival by the way and I'm giving it a shot as a newer author. This is actually a debut novel. Thank you, and I hope you can support me in this journey!