Void_master62

You could say that

This is without doubt one of the more interesting fanfictions i have read, there are some undesirable points but overall it was an enjoyable read so keep going and don't drop this, it has potential.

Well it does not matter though the involved individual is dead completely, and i too was wrong although not fully.

it was a bit sudden but i can cope with it and i would request you to keep the quality of the chapters so far consistent with the coming chapters.

No i do not think it IS his lover i just hope it's not and is his brother or something as you so kindly pointed out.

i hope so

man please don't add any love interests as logic would have it by the way you have described mc upto now he has transcended the need for a female companion because in his long life of over 10000 years i am quite sure he has tried every variety so i request that you do not ruin the story by adding anything like that

she ain't no true friend brotha....

yes that slipped my mind thank you, i will do something about it in the coming hunts

Dear gent, I fail to see how that is of any relevance to the story, as i see it the aforementioned character got a few lines of exposure, Am i inclined to elaborate the backstory of every minor character.