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Emilarrow_Viper18mthCommentedCh 75 Chapter 77- Emilarrow_Viper18mthCommented
COME ON!! The FOREHEAD?!
Their eyes locked, an unspoken understanding passing between them. Aiden leaned in, his lips brushing against Elara's forehead, a gesture of affection and gratitude. - Emilarrow_Viper18mthPosted
This book so far, yet not done yet, is something I believe is unique art. The comical characters that can’t control their personalities through a page is so well written that even when i’m bed ridden I feel I can stay Smitten. The unique power of spit that mends wounds is a trick that I find myself doing when I was young, I can’t help but think of that. Truly a rhetorical masterpiece that understands its audience!
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Special Super CleaninG POWER!
With newfound confidence, Elara swung the broom with incredible speed and precision, creating a whirlwind of movement. The tassels cracked through the air, rapidly hitting the ground, walls, and everything around them. It was a constant barrage of attacks, unpredictable and difficult to avoid. - Emilarrow_Viper18mthCommentedCh 36 Chapter 36: Unleashed Mastery
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that sounds so cool. The bird mask man.. Reminds me of a plague doctor mask
The Bird Mask Man, his demeanor as enigmatic as ever, turned to Aiden with a small, knowing smile. "Ah, young ones, you see, there is more to my abilities than meets the eye. What I wield is not just wind; it is Neo Lights-infused wind. With it, I can shape and solidify the air itself, forging weapons like the rapier you saw." - Emilarrow_Viper18mthCommented
I really like the amount of detail you added
The blazing inferno engulfed the stone monstrosity, melting its rocky form and reducing it to a smoldering pile of rubble. Their triumphant victory resonated through the chamber as the dungeon's final guardian was vanquished. - Emilarrow_Viper18mthCommented
Woah!
Elara, on the other hand, trained her healing ability by spitting on Aiden's wounds, no matter how severe they became. Her power had evolved to the point where she could mend blisters and frostburns caused by Aiden's extreme temperature fluctuations. As her healing abilities grew stronger, they expanded beyond just healing living beings; she could now repair objects as well. - Emilarrow_Viper18mthCommented
Hmmm Emilio, Sounds like a fine name for what will be a good man 😁- Emilio
Her little Emilio is very cute. Whenever I see him, I am reminded of how Elena used to be like. My little princess back then was just a tiny little baby that constantly peed her diapers and now she was all grown up. - Emilarrow_Viper18mthCommented
That sounds sick
The man in the bird mask went on, "Focusing 'The Neo Lights' into your hands can grant you immense strength and resilience. Your strikes will be like thunder, and your defenses unyielding." - Emilarrow_Viper18mthReplied to Ceaseless_Voices
He just said. He would not be able to get stronger using guns in level
Instead, he decided to lock the door of the armory. The reason behind this was, all the weapons that were present there were all dangerous. The level that they were currently in was not enough to deal with these hot weapons. - Emilarrow_Viper18mthCommented
What a real friend
But when he saw that Henry was standing still, without making any movement, he thought that perhaps Henry had frozen in fear. So, he immediately braced himself to face the wolf. There was no way that he was going to allow Henry to be killed off like that. - Emilarrow_Viper18mthCommented
Haha this is still funny!
As a gesture of gratitude and celebration, Aiden allowed Elara to heal him once more. She spit and stroked him. Energy blazing as she spit on him. This time, the energy flowed between them differently, as if their powers had reached a new level of synergy. Aiden's body temperature soared to heights he had never before achieved, while Elara's healing became more potent and efficient than ever. - Emilarrow_Viper18mthCommented
Haha that is kind of weird, But I get it’s for the plot and that is her ability so… Haha 😄
With her saliva, Elara mended Aiden's wounds, her touch soothing and revitalizing. Aiden's gratitude swelled in his chest, but amidst the adrenaline-fueled frenzy of combat, there was something more—a surge of emotions he had long suppressed. She rubbed her spit on him erratically. Licking him up and down. - Emilarrow_Viper18mthCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1 - The World of Uncharted Powers
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Finally the ending! I found myself waiting time and again for the chapters every day! the test of unity is such a powerful concept and I liked that is what you played with. A look into the world, of society, of it’s own misgivings.. The world could be so much better with unity yet not everyone is willing to make that final push against the tests that are waiting against them..
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- Emilarrow_Viper18mthCommentedCh 25 Chapter 25: The Escape