Sunofthemorning

Try and read the top ten novels on this site and you will know if the explanation and details in this novel are perfect or exaggerated.

There's no need to complicate simple things or actions. Saying he picked up a stone and hit the monster with it is a true action, and there's nothing wrong with saying that. It doesn't need further explanation. He did pick up a stone and hit the monster with it. What more can be said? Do we have to complicate things and explain the texture of the stone and its protrusions? It's not just about over-explaining simple actions. You explained the same thing twice. That's strange. You explained in detail how Kyle killed the monster. Then later, when he absorbed the shard and after you read the System notification, you explained again how he killed the monster. You even explained again how he fought the monster and what he got, even though he already got the shard and absorbed it. So why repeat it? You said that fans of Shadow Slave and Reverend Insanity would like this novel. I think you've already read them. Are those novels over-explained? Again, explaining some things is fine. But explaining the same thing twice and over-explaining and describing simple actions makes me sleepy. And especially at the beginning of your novel. The reader enters a world they know nothing about. Instead of overwhelming them with details and explanations, let them understand things first, then explain only what needs explaining.

I've read up to Chapter 2, and this isn't a review. I just want to ask a few questions. I don't speak English, so I'm using Google Translate. The problem with these chapters is the excessive explanation. The author says something, then explains it again. This made me feel sleepy. For example, the system mentions the monster's name and level. Okay, we know its level and name. But after notifying it, Kyle repeats the same information—its name and level—along with some nonsense. The author explains in detail how Kyle killed the monster, and then in Chapter 2, he explains again how Kyle killed the monster. I hope the author reduces the excessive explanation. Unimportant information or details should be mentioned briefly and that's it. There's no need for lengthy explanations of things that readers don't care about or that aren't important to the story. I also want to ask if the power levels in this novel are enormous? Could the power system reach the level of planets, galaxies, or the universe? And will Kyle make foolish decisions under the guise of thinking it's clever? For example, I read a novel where the main character defecates on himself and immerses himself in excrement, supposedly because it was a clever move. I don't want the main character to make such unpleasant decisions, like humiliating himself or letting others humiliate him, simply because it's considered a clever move. Finally, is the novel long? And will you stop writing it if it doesn't receive any support? No one wants to waste their time reading a novel that won't last. Most readers want a lot of chapters in a novel, so they won't start reading your story until it reaches at least 100 chapters. I'll leave this comment here until the novel reaches the point of free chapters. Then I'll consider reading it and giving an honest review.

Hey author do you know why we love Shadow Slave and Lord of the Mysteries Besides the interesting world characters and plot there is something more important which is the main character Klein and Sunny were great characters that perfectly matched their worlds but here the main character is very bad and stupid Nobody likes stupid characters and nobody likes a main character who saves people trying to kill him You cannot make the character dumb and naive then slowly make him act like a normal person and call that character development No it is not If you want to compare your novel to Shadow Slave and Lord of the Mysteries then focus more on the main character I do not want him to be a crazy killer who murders people No I just want him to fit his world

14 chapters. How boring. This novel is slow and tedious. He had a warrior and someone to protect him, but he sent him to his death to protect people he didn't know. His parents died, and his empire was destroyed. He fell from his position as a prince and lost his mana. Instead of being careful, he throws his life away for no reason. The girl, Elena, or whatever her name is, looked at him with contempt and even tried to harm him, but he risked his life for her. The writing style is terrible. Two lines explain what's actually happening, and the rest of the lines talk about unimportant people, places, or legends. I also feel like it was written by AI. The Infinite Mana novel was good for at least 2000 chapters, and the events were fast-paced. But here it's slow, with a main character who's trash.

This is very annoying. The writing style is extremely dramatic. It seems to me like it was written by AI. Too much description for something so simple. I went to text verification websites and found that 80% of the text was written by AI. I wouldn't mind if the chapter was written but translated by AI. But for the chapter to be written by AI is bad.

Chapter 30. It takes me several days to read just one chapter because it's so boring. I don't know why I should read it. There's no motivation to keep reading. I haven't seen anything about the world to get excited about. I don't like the main character's personality, so I don't look forward to his adventures. Basically, I believe that someone who wants freedom from everything must be evil. They shouldn't be bound by people, laws, feelings, or anything else. And it's clear that the main character here isn't like that. Simply put, I heard that he still has to work hard and plan to defeat his enemies, and in my opinion, that's a bad thing. In short, I don't like the main character, the world, or the purpose of the journey.

I stopped reading a long time ago. I even wrote a review. But even now, I still can't believe that the Red King isn't the main character. He's the main reason I read it in the first place. When the Red King took over Cain's body, I was so excited. I thought, "Finally, we're rid of this stupid character. Now the real story begins." But it turns out it isn't. That's where I stopped. Sigh. I wish I could erase all my memories of this story.

Yes, I did. After reading 1600 chapters, I felt it was a waste of time. The main character is a sleeping princess. He's asleep in 70% of the chapters I read.

What kind of ridiculous logic is this? Trying to look like an ordinary person is better than being ordinary and fighting machines? It's not my fault. You wrote it that way. You tried to make him appear ordinary, and that's what people saw. In future fights, challenges, and tests, everyone will think he's just an ordinary, insignificant person because he pretended to be. If people don't act that way in the future, then make him shine and show his power. I don't care if he's trying to understand human behavior or not. I don't want to read hundreds of chapters about the academy without any purpose or goal, just for some silly thing about observing humans. If he's not benefiting from the academy in any way, he should simply leave. Either take it seriously or quit. I can't believe anything is so ridiculous as hiding his power from the beginning. It completely ruined the story for me. I've read hundreds of novels where the protagonist hides their power, but here it was just ridiculous. Good luck with your novel.