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DaoistiSR6eF

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  • DaoistiSR6eF
    DaoistiSR6eF1yr
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    Doesn't smell good for Kotaro there.

    However, Kotaro and the Mystery Demon have become one and are about to complete great investigations together, and meet several mysterious and special people.
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  • DaoistiSR6eF
    DaoistiSR6eF1yr
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    Oh yes anyway.

    The long tomorrow kotaro goes to the police station to describe the identity of the criminal, and it turns out that this criminal was one of the members of the gang of the headless, one of the major criminal organizations existing within the country . Their leader Mizu, is a follower of occult practice and one of the most wanted criminals in the country. But the police were never able to incarcerate this criminal, many described him as a superhuman linked to these superhuman abilities.
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  • DaoistiSR6eF
    DaoistiSR6eF1yr
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    He sees his father in bad shape he should rather help him, he should have been still alive.😭

    So Kotaro was walking towards his father's room and there was no one there, Kotaro started worrying about the situation until he decided to go to the bathroom, horrified by what he was saw, he finds his father lying on the ground in a bloodbath disturbed by this horror scene, Kotaro screams with all his might.
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  • DaoistiSR6eF
    DaoistiSR6eF1yr
    Commented

    Interesting start to the novel.

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  • DaoistiSR6eF
    DaoistiSR6eF1yr
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    the chapter as a whole is quite good, but you can do better.

    Ch 1 Pact
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  • DaoistiSR6eF
    DaoistiSR6eF1yr
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    I find that the scenario of the novel corresponds to perfection, with my type of character in the work. so I expect good personal development from you, good luck for the future.

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