Nick1324
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I really liked this story but I feel like the author tries to draw out the story and plot as much as he can to the point I start to get bored and the grammar need a fix the author legit thows as many useless words as he can into the grammer that u end up reading 13 chapter “arc” on a auction because every word is split into 5 words because it sounds better when it really just draws it out
I get pissed off every time this guy spends fate point he keeps using it on stupid shit instead of buying shit he clealy needs….
if you want a fast paced and overpowered mc story this is not for you but if you want a steady story with great World Building and character development this is a novel for you