Abel_Black_66

Mostly killed them.

I liked the story personally. But to be honest , mysister and friends liked it even more. The writing is smooth and the story is good. I hope to see more of you. Best of luck

So far so good. Hope to see development in the writing quality. But other than that, it was great. I actually want the protagonist to be more appealing, he seems kind of plain. But the killer is really amazing. Overall, can't wait for the next chapters.

Not bad at all. With a bit improvement, you can actually reach new heights sooner or later

Beautiful indeed

Wow, that was brutal!

Interesting