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Thechosenone_993557minCommentedBipolar i say
The confusion in Xavier's face receded and a frown flashed in his eyes, "You were not hurt?" He asked, his voice laced with concern.- Thechosenone_99351hCommented
Now that makes you seem crazy
His laughter made Caleb relax and he joined Mishal in his laughter, laughing for minutes on end for two completely different reasons. - Thechosenone_99354dReplied to AnnieQuin
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UP to chap 50 It was fine and all at the start with the FL being willful naive and immature that's okay. The ML honestly, he is a fine man who should stop thinking with his third leg and half of his misfortunes will be gone. Then from chap 25+ the FL is becoming one of the worst type of sh!t there is, she is like me me me me everyting is about her, her kingdom her father everyting can burn to hell if she can have her very "prince charming". She never stop to think about consequences and when she does nothing good ever happened. That being said the author is very well verse with words, a bit poetic sometimes, her style is great and expressive, but i really really really can't like the character she sets as the FL so i can't enjoy the story as it should. So i'm stopping here
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Your female lead is sick and her being one the lead i don't want to read more about her at this point to be honest
Hello everyone, I hope you're enjoying reading this as much as I enjoy writing it. Now, I would love to hear what you think about the characters of this novel. So yes, please leave a comment. Tell me what they are lacking, who do you like, who do you hate. Let me know in the comments. Thank you. - Thechosenone_99354dCommented
Yeah i kind of forgot she is this kind of disgusting prejudiced entitled selfish and many worse being
"Do you think I happily wanted to sleep with that useless barbarian?" I suddenly snap. "No. I wanted my first night to be with Lyle! But I also needed a way to break this engagement! I need someone to be the scapegoat! If I had given my chastity to Lyle, his life would have been in danger, but I do not care for the life of that barbarian. Why should I?" She shrugged, as if shrugging off every bit of guilt that was trying to cling to her shoulders. - Thechosenone_99354dCommented
The blame game huh
This was all his fault! If only he'd let her go back home, if only he'd released her and not insisted on keeping her there with him! Oh how she hated him. - Thechosenone_99354dCommented
She is so cute 🤣🤣🤣
Oh, but why was he starting again? It was over, it was already over. He had broken her virginity, what more was he doing? - Thechosenone_99354dCommented
My fellow African girl to actually compare that part with a sugarcane
"Don't do that." It sounded like a warning. And she raised her lashes to look at him. Oh lords! The light, why did he have to light the entire candles? One or two would have sufficed. Why all? It was so damn bright! She could still see that thick sugarcane standing below his abdomen, and goddess help her, she could swear it grew even bigger now. - Thechosenone_99354dCommented"Oh would you shut up! I have had very good education and I have been taught by good teachers. That thing, oh dear goddess," she almost cried, "that thing is not supposed to look like that! It looks like there's a staff, a rod, a kind of wood inside it! It's like a thick long sugarcane looking at me!"
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Seriously
"I have been taught! I am not stupid. It is supposed to be like a child's! Just a wee bigger!" Lords! She was trying to keep her eyes up, to just look at his face. It was weird how he was so tall, and she could be looking anywhere else on his body, but her eyes constantly went back there. - Thechosenone_99354dCommented“I'm back,” Zenos announced and calmly walked towards their bar which was stocked with famous, expensive, rare, and ancient non-alcoholic and alcoholic different types of drinks.
- Thechosenone_99354dCommentedCh 41 Be Good
- Thechosenone_99354dCommentedHayden was unhappy throughout, and he can't bear to watch anymore, or else he wouldn't know how to control his actions toward Rose for attempting to steal his man.
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Seriously what's happening ?
Why? Why is this person like this? Why is this person so good to him? His heart and eyes softened, and he immediately ran into Zenos's embrace. His hand made its way to Zenos's waist and wrapped around it as he hugged Zenos. He laid his head on Zenos's chest. It was cold but comforting to him. He looked up at Zenos with red-rimmed eyes. “I apologize for earlier.” He apologized for the first time. - Thechosenone_99354dCommented
I don't like cheating no matter the form or reasons. That girl seems like trouble but still
He paced about in his room thinking if Zenos had forgotten about him and their date but when it was exactly 5:45, he heard the smooth sound of Zenos' car which made him hurry outside. - Thechosenone_99359dCommented
After 1k+ chapters
He had done everything he could, and she had no choice but to agree. - Thechosenone_993516dCommented
I find it pointless to try to stop something you know firmly deep down you can't
I want them to meet, they deserved to talk and get the closure that Mr. Vanderborg wanted. But, if they meet, questions after questions will soon be revealed and that will point to the Chairman and me, which I don't want Ellis to know. - Thechosenone_993516dCommented
That's the scariest type
"Actually, yeah, I don't see Mr. CEO getting mad at meetings or his rounds, he's always smiling, you know. He knows how to create an atmosphere that is bright and full of hope and love." - Thechosenone_993516dCommented
He is a jerk
There's a real reason why I did that but it should not be discussed and I will keep it to myself.