jaykun13

Its neither. Who he was is still a mystery :P

the first chapters are really good, it has a lot of potential and you have created a nice environment and characters, i will try to keep up with the updates. ^.^

Ease read. I will totally check it all out as i like those kind of stories.. Keep the good work, i think it has a lot of potential. Really creative.

Seems pretty mature and well written novel, i like the character and the concept a lot. I will definitely read it through so i can come up with some new ideas of my own. Keep it up ^.^

Good thing for them. they can monopolize it O.O :P

thanks a lot ^.^

Yeah its already pretty hard sometimes to swap pov's, but i like first person pov more than third in general. Hope it will work for me. thanks for the comment ^.^

Here just to give myself a review, I have a story outline ready and it will get really good later on i promise, a lot of epic battles, high fantasy elements, i will also upload many illustrations and many morally grey characters (which i love). Hope you all like what is to come ^.^

The world kinda hits at home, also the illustration looks peaceful i liked it a lot. The usage of language looks cool. Keep it up you got it.