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Potential! I must say, it is exciting diving into the world. While it's not without flaws, the potential of the plot and promise on display are certainly good. Writing - Needs improvement. A lot. But it's readable, understable and sufficient. Still, if the author can improve the writing by a level or two, it will be amazing. Tip- Focus on some realistic reactions from characters, situations and such. Plot- Since there isn't much of plot given till now, I have considered it's potential. If The author plays it right, the plot can become a great piece among 'system' contents. Character - Dialogues! they make or break the characters and it is good to see, character have plenty interaction. Well done there. Just needs some refinement. World Building- Although not unique in its genre with systems, ranks, monsters, etc. I could understand the world quite a lot from the first 15 chapters. So, I would say it was done great. Well, there is more to explore in future, so I belive again in it's potential. Overall, it is a good story. Needs editing and refinements, but still enjoyable.

Good writing. Easy to understand and flow with the story. Needs a slight improvement in minor details, but overall great. Story is interesting. A cruel beast and an adorable princess. Familiar but intriguing. Character designing is done amazingly. World building is yet to be explored but up until now, well done!

the best part was the character description and writing style. it hit it off with the slice of life genre and feels nice and fluid paced. The world building needs to have more clarity and a little more courses of action rather than a monologs would be appreciated.

The author uses the word "quickly" too much.