Escape_Sequence
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Escape_Sequencea year agoReplied to ShuviLilynot sure what you are talking about. the entire book is in the 1st person, there is no 3rd person at all. i certainly wont be rewriting anything based on your feedback.
- Escape_Sequencea year agoReplied to Lore_God
you know, I dont actually care what you think
- Escape_Sequencea year agoReplied to Ancient_Egyptian
This makes more sense later, as Ye comes from a lineage that is rare within the Nin Realm.
- Escape_Sequence2 years agoReplied to TOXIC_SKULL_GAMING
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- Escape_Sequence2 years agoReplied to kaval187
That's good to know. Thank you for reading.
- Escape_Sequence2 years agoReplied to Pedro_Sousa
Very true. Archery, unarmed combat and fist techniques are some of the many skills Ye must acquire from Martial Arts Skill Tree.
- Escape_Sequence2 years agoPosted
Author here. Mechagear NEON is an action-packed thriller with more lore than you can shake a stick at. It is much darker than my other work, dealing with heavier themes like class division, authoritarianism and war. The world of Neon City is even more imperfect than ours, but I think there are still parallels to our society. If you're looking for a story to lose yourself in, specifically one with a futuristic or cyberpunk theme, this is the one.
- Escape_Sequence2 years agoReplied to Blissful_ChaotiC
Thank you for the feedback. I think you'll find there's more character depth later in the series.
- Escape_Sequence2 years agoPosted
This is a very dark story with strong world building. The author has intricately crafted a detailed world. And most importantly, he presents his ideas in a digestible manner without relying on lore dumps. There's a lot of "showing" and little "telling", which creates immersion and lets the story flow smoothly. I'm looking forward to reading more.
