the development of your story is quite good and the MC's mindset is not bad, continue to improve the quality of the story and develop ideas to continue with the latest updates, I hope you are happy and stay healthy, goodbye writer

Hahahah 😂 ambiguous, not bad storyline, keep it up,

Haha good idea

Enel's fruit, Toki Toki no Mi fruit (recommended), Kizaru's fruit, Akainu, or soul soul fruit, door door fruit with slight modifications can go to the past or future (passive type)(recommended), Kaido's fruit, white beard, Yamato's fruit(recommended)

hahaha Casanova, I like that but it's a shame the boss isn't a woman Jason either, hahaha women come first before friends if you flip it then you're "Green" or "greenest" if you know what that means you're a Casanova if not then you're just an addicted lover Love

Hahaha 😂 Not bad storyline

too bad, continue the "game" focus and reduce the yuri just make them take turns and don't make the female MC become Yuri

it's a shame that three women is too few at least five or seven

the storyline is pretty good, a few suggestions: don't make the MC too good, make him manipulative and a little lustful and especially possessive of his women, and continue to improve the quality of the story and continue with the latest updates, I hope you are happy and stay healthy, goodbye writer

hahaha maybe and possibly his legendary pants will sag

hahaha very familiar words and it's a reasonable statement not to say in the real world if you don't want to be hit with a bag/shoe or even if you're unlucky you'll get a few punches/kicks from some woman, or if you're lucky you'll have a "fun" night with one or two or even three girls or at least a drink at the bar and a nice conversation who knows luck accompanies those who are brave, so to hell with the risks plus those words would be better if the woman/girl was in good condition " especially" if not the chances are pretty low. Advice for beginners don't say those cheap words if you're nervous some "naughty" woman will take advantage of you, but screw it because it's at your own risk haha

your story is quite interesting, and well, I hope the MC takes advantage of every opportunity that exists because there are many holes in Marvel that need to be addressed, and a little advice: make the MC a little cold and manipulative and don't really care about other people's responses or thoughts because that would be better

haha you make a good MC and don't need to take too long to get power, and your MC's power is quite good compared to the place next door where the MC can also absorb power, allies/enemies or whoever he wants but it's not permanent and if you want it to be permanent you have to kill him first the original owner, continue to improve the quality of the story and don't lower the quality because if it goes down it will be disappointing, be enthusiastic about continuing to update the latest and strengthen your mind and heart so that you don't suddenly drop your novel like some writers who are not strong enough with readers' comments that are "spicy" " and many readers like to "roast" the author including myself hahahaha so the latest update continues and I hope you are happy and stay healthy goodbye author

,huh, I'm relieved because you already understood it just once so I don't need to say harsh words and I'm glad you understand the author and don't make trash chapters like that again ok, I hope you're happy and still have good ideas to continue improving the quality of the story and continuation of the latest update, goodbye author

Wow, it turns out you are quite "cultured" haha

Not bad

Pretty good Marvel story, writer, develop ideas and continue to improve the quality of the story, a little advice: don't make the MC hesitate to kill and don't make the MC's character change with more and more assimilation of the characters he has because somewhere there is something like that and the MC becomes has a split personality and it's quite annoying