I am dying due to laughing bro hes hilarious 😂😂😂😂😂😂 its's 5 am and i can't Stop reading way better than your everyday Mc I love you author this is a masterpiece. Plus the flying meteor hilarious 😂😂😂😂😂

First please Ignore these people shouting this that late pacing and shit. If they want Op shitin 2 days of training there are plenty already. Author I really loved his interaction with the yamanaka Ino and her mom. It was peak the way Sauske and Ino talked to each other. it was as if Sasuke was shown through Ino's view. but he wasnr't but i as reader kinda felt how enigmatic he was in that chapter. Also hate Ino's mom shes's the mother fookin Yamanaka clan heads's wife she should have tried to offer sauske free flowers but sasuke should have rejected it. ch 29 is kinda mid tho cause Sauske was too honest revealing his ace. I had hoped he went bat shit when Ayame gave him the noodle just to seem like a dum kid but he didn't. kinda sadage

A letter to author san My favourite ff author the due points you said is true in a sense but it gave your story a different twist. dungeons were also good just not the part part you made scared gears and swords useless. Other than that I wished that Riser got some justice but no gonna lie that beat up had a different magic of its own. So scratch that. So all in all a solid 8 in story pacing was also fine although a little slow and sloppy here and there and i think bringing shuri back is also kinda meh but sure ff for a reason I guess.

I was mind boggled when I started reading it but now it has lost its's high quality due to lack details and Mc constantly talking unrelated shit I mean I really like his persona and his jokes but the story is super shit as of now. No new developments so far but I don't know how to describe it lacks depth or more of a kick.

if you have good ways to intrioduce that concept there maybe

Bro was assumed hero but jus a sec later got the demon clan 😭🤣🤣🤣

huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuubhhhhhhbhbb???????????

Please take care of yourself, Your health comes first. This comes from a fellow Indian as well. ahh and I been lurking around and like haven't commented at all. my bad but do take care

no nooooo god nooo please noooooooooooo!!!!!!? the forbidden code nooooooooooo

it's pretty good

is mc scheming again?

it's a solid 3 because of his jokes and personality but side characters lack depth mean author fails to capture their personality but Mc is big brain I like it but this story has a lot of plot holes unexplained/ doesn't make sense aheem yes I am looking at you Sona sitri's book shelf. And also his plot of bringing Lucifer is kinda lackin. All in all a rewrite with definitive reasons for what he does would do wonders for this story. Note not saying it is bad or anything I've seen worse here but this story has sooo muccccch and muccch more potential than this and this review is solely based on read at ch33

I been waiting !!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! come back !!!!!!!!!!!

seriously I would have never touched it if I read the synopsis ( I hate dxd) gfs but good dem I am happy that I gave it a go and I didn't regret it l.

keep em rooolin

satisfied af

thanks for the cappy yum yum 😋😋🤤🤤

i havent watched boruto much but this shit is epic and I have read your previous work I came here after finishing it up good think you removed his powers before using it.

I have been reading fanfics for about 3 years now. some of them are Naruto ones , Avatar ones, a few Dc ones a few Mtl ones majority of them consists of naruto ones tho genshin fics and MHA ones but this is the diamonds in the rough this story has the most natural integration of the mc in the world and the clever use of Kyubbi attack to orphan him and make him feel iffy about Naruto and his 30% retention of memories is an ingenious idea truthfully. I don't really care about Harem since people can have multiple relationship until they commit to someone. So I don't mind him having a more humane side since we all have had various relations. Bro I love how he interacts with his aunt and uncle. And the most fun times for me were when he thew jabs at sakura's forehead without even saying it. WHAHAHAHHAHAHAAA

I'll try to gib power stones as much as I can did 2 just now hope you keep it going